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the darker parts

Poem By: Penny Ritchie
Poetry


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Submitted: Aug 23, 2008    Reads: 56    Comments: 4    Likes: 1   


I told on you Mama.

told about the saline day with the blades,

in the bathroom,

on the floor.

 

So long your eyes glittered in the glass,

looking in,

looking out,

at me,

in the doorway,

at you,

emptying, red and endless.

 

I told about the tub,

the one filled with turpentine,

and sums of us,

as we washed,

fermenting,

melting into the slack.

 

That was before

Before you stood,

in the field,

a light falling poison snow

on your lashes

on the corn,

in your thoughts,

burning.

 

That was after

After you reached down my throat,

felt around,

and pulled out

the beating,

that was

me.

 


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Comments:

oooooooooooooh. I like it. it kinda gave me goosebumps. It also kinda lingers with you after you read it. Very nice

Posted: Aug 24, 2008

Wow. The imagery is so vivid. and the message is very profound. You did a great job.

Posted: Aug 24, 2008

*Speechless* That was...WOW. A very good poem! Nice details.

Posted: Aug 24, 2008

oh man i'm loving it
parents ae.....
they can always find a way to hurt you
but they are the ones you can always turn to when you feel down and blue and
the ones who will always be there
anyway...... great poem....!

Posted: Aug 27, 2008

Author Comment:

True that! My mom and I have gone thru alot--as evidenced by the poem, but we've been able to change together!



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