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A Day's Work

Poem By: phyllz
Poetry


Author's Note: There are different meanings in each poems, from different people who are reading. So, my own meaning of the poem I made, might be different from yours. So, you're welcome to comment. I just made this poem out of the blue. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Sep 8, 2008    Reads: 37    Comments: 1    Likes: 0   


The morning that was shining so brightly,

was the opposite; so dimly.

The heart that ached,

The heart that broke,

was the thought of an unsatisfied stroke.

The sharpness of the mind,

made the eye go blind.

The afternoon [that] grew old,

was [something] unexpectedly cold.

Through the skin that barred,

that the flesh faded.

A thin line of evening; so pale.

[The] Light grew clear.

The unsatisfied stroke needed to unbend,

for the senses; for the chances.


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Comments:

hey, when i read this, i immediately was reminded of my team-mates; with our different ways of thinking and understanding, we constantly argue with another, which made us to feel quite discontent and later drove us to think that our attempted cooperations are useless. great poem:) the way i understand some things is just plain weird

Posted: Sep 19, 2008



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