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Poetry By: Please

This is my feelings (in general and in personal forms) towards parents who do not behave responsibly, and who treat their children like possetions, if they treat them like anything at all!
The format is a little weird, if it is to weird please let me know, thanks!
Please comment :)

Submitted:Dec 8, 2011    Reads: 28    Comments: 9    Likes: 4   

General Version:

Which is more crazy?

Having a baby,

And being to lazy

To take care of the child you sired?


Carrying the life

Having pregnancy's strife

And then like with a knife

Hurting the gift you inspired?

Extended Personal Version:

Nobody made you.

So why does it faze you

When others expect you too

Actually act like an adult?

Is it asking to much

That you show a parents touch?

Just to love him as such,

Something precious of which to exalt?


Don't you worry yourself

Probably better for his health

That you keep your worthless wealth

Away from his amazing existence

He will be loved

By more than enough

And not the superficial stuff

You give at others insistence.

Do it quick, though

If you want to go

Before he can know

What you were supposed to do.

I know if you wait

And treat him as bait

Then leave him to fate

Exactly what you'll be putting him through.

You thrust him into my arms

Now its my job to keep him from harms

And you! You set off alarms

He's not just one of your toys!

If you grow up

Your lame boyfriend dump

And get your cold heart to pump

Could you make the right choice?

I don't know.


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