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This is a poem i wrote after I saw my mom hand a cup of coffee toa homeless guy, I just put myself in her shoes...
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Submitted: Aug 11, 2007    Reads: 64    Comments: 3    Likes: 0   


Walking around,
Lost to the world,
His hopeless gaze
Follows my stride,
As I walk down the road,
Holding out his hand,
I walk away,
Not looking into his eyes,
I look ahead and think,
What good would it do,
He'd probably just go out to drink,
I walk into the coffee shop,
And talk a friend,
She says he stays all night,
In the corner,
Holding out his hand,
I buy a drink and start to leave,
I think twice before buying a second,
I'm being selfish I know,
I walk out into the snow
And hand him his cup,
He stares at me with that hopeless gaze,
And then he smiles,
And took a drink,
I can't forget that smile,
A brief flash of  hope,
The first he'd felt in years,
I Smile  as I leave,
Thinking to myself,
The next time I walk down this street,
I wont have to think twice.


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Comments:

ThE mOsT pOwErFuLl PaRt Is
"I can't forget that smile,
A brief flash of hope,
The first he'd felt in years,"
:D:D:D:D:D

Posted: Aug 12, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanx!!!
I thought so too...
What's with the CAPITAL LETTERS KID???? Just Kidding!!
just expressing yourself huh... GOOD!! JK....
Thanx for reading and Glad you liked it (Again!!!)
Can't wait to read more of Jenovan War...
^_^! *Peace!*

Robert Storm
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Fabulous! I love someone with sensitivity to others plights. It can be rough world out there. Someitmes it makes cold and unaware. I loved it. That pic made me see the old guy in my head.

Posted: Feb 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks!
I tried to make it a bit more realistic then most my other poems!
Glad you liked it! :D

Robert Storm
(not registered user)

I'm having a brain storm. This piece would add a needed demention on my sight. Edit it more and send it if you like the sight. Eva Camilla will be there.

Posted: Feb 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Ok! I think I will do that! :D



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