My tainted wings
Black as night,
Dulled by heavens
Holy light,
Burning flame
Patient fire,
Dwindling dusk
Blazing dawn,
Booming voice
Soft sweet tune,
All beating in my heart to make
My tainted wings as
Black as night,
Dulled by heavens
Holy light.
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Submitted: Aug 12, 2007 Reads: 59 Comments: 8 Likes: 2
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Great image at the end. I could see a dark angel being illuminated. Thanks for the image. It was cool as hell. Very symbolic.
Posted: Aug 12, 2007
I like the poem style. A lot.
The contrast between each line is awesome too.
Like where you said "dwindling dusk" "breaking dawn".
Sheer melody! 5/5!
Posted: Aug 29, 2007
Wow! Your poem had a great rhythm, I was nodding my head to it! The imagery is great, and it ran really smoothly. I loved it!
Posted: Oct 31, 2007
FIFTH, FIFTH! THIS IS AN OUTRAGE SOMEONE DESERVES TO BE SHOT!
Posted: Nov 4, 2007
OUTRAGE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted: Nov 4, 2007
yes i like ti, it means i think this should have one and its an outrage that it didn't also the judge needs to be shot :)
Posted: Nov 5, 2007
Strong voice and Strong words... a beautiful read!
Posted: Feb 13, 2008
april this has always been one of my favorite poems of yours and yes the judge should be shot
Posted: Dec 1, 2008
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