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Withered Time

Poem By: poet 3
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This is a poem by me and REAPER! Yes, we combined our powerful intellectual minds for poetry and came up with this! :D
Read it, and you wont be disappointed! :D View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Apr 5, 2008    Reads: 40    Comments: 5    Likes: 2   


Time withers away your beautiful face,

Pulling strands of endless light,

Endless light I know will end,

Shining down,

Illumination spreads,

Your beauty will be ripped to shreds,

Fading into a deeper darkness,

Darkness that shadows my soul,

Tearing me apart,

Inside my heart of hearts.

I wish I could escape,

Could run from these shadows,

Climbing the pits of Hell,

The pits of Hell,

Shadows of fire,

Breathing heat down my neck as I run through,

As I escape into the light,

Where your beautiful face is withered into time.


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:) YAY it came out well!

Posted: Apr 5, 2008

Author Comment:

It did, it did!!!!
YAY!

this is really really nice!! great poem!! you both work really well together obviously! *thumbs up*

Posted: Apr 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks Mae!

Great ! You have passed a lot time out but now you have back with this good one poem!

Posted: Apr 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks so much!

It really sounds great! I like it... but was this just one paragraph? Or I didn't saw it?

Posted: Apr 16, 2008

Author Comment:

It was the whole poem actually! :D
Glad you liked it! :D

yes, you make a great duo.

Posted: Apr 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you! I think so too!



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