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Submitted: Aug 4, 2008 Reads: 59 Comments: 8 Likes: 6
Small room with 12 bathrooms.
DEALS, DEALS, DEALS.
Envelopes fill the baskets.
Mirrors with lipstick kisses.
In the small room - elbows bump.
Into the office.
OCCUPIED - next bathroom.
Outside neighbors look.
Cesspool trucks arrive.
Dirt cover-up off lid.
Man preys lid open.
Next years news escapes.
CESSPOOL CLEAN and POLATICS AGAIN.
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JESUS SAVES
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Brilliant Poewhit. Hectic and bleak in a blink. PS I have missed your comments lately!
Posted: Aug 4, 2008
ah, is this comparing politics to the bathroom?
have not seen you in a while poewhit
all is well?
~katie
Posted: Aug 4, 2008
This is about as unique as it gets. This is amazing in so many ways...this is art. Take care, Regan
Posted: Aug 5, 2008
Welcome back! Missed you postings and comments. And this one does not disappoint! Politics as usual...
Peace.....Jerry
Posted: Aug 6, 2008
hi! poewhit. where were u. u went off with a whimper but returned with a bang. and what a bang - political! enjoyed it thoroughly. lol. ;-)
Posted: Aug 12, 2008
a cesspool indeed , politicians are the same the world over too .
Posted: Aug 15, 2008
Jesus saves and does the opposite, apparently. Good statement though. I liked where you put politics, right where it belongs, lol. Hmmm. Someone should have wipe their butt with Politics in the end, lol.
Posted: Sep 5, 2008
Yes, it does seem inevitable doesn't it. A well done social commentary.
I'd appreciate any comments you might give on my new poem: Judge Knot.
craaig
Posted: Sep 17, 2008
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