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Submitted: Feb 27, 2008 Reads: 95 Comments: 15 Likes: 4
What is that little pea.
Now it's inside of me.
" NOW I OWN YOU MANKIND ".
It's only the size of a grain of sand.
" IT TELLS ME ALL ".
" WHEN YOU COME AND WHEN CALL ".
But now I am not really me.
This seed controls all of me.
" MICRO-CHIP WONDER - I AM NOW YOUR MASTER ".
" I KNOW ALL ABOUT YOU - I OWN YOU ".
What has happen to us all ????????
Maybe man's final downfall.
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JESUS SAVES
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Ah yes! Everything about us can be, probably is, recorded in something smaller than a fingernail.
GREAT poem!
Posted: Feb 27, 2008
Very good poe, but what has Jesus got to do with anything anymore? He was killed 2000 years ago.
Posted: Feb 27, 2008
i like the poem! i like the part about mankind and all-it's like there are no secrets-they're all revealed one way or another and yet, there are a million secrets out there. amazing how technology is taking over us. someday it will. well, great poem!
:)
Posted: Feb 27, 2008
Poewhit.....Great write......and who knows what the future will bring!! Til later Juliet
Posted: Feb 27, 2008
Tis here already; CHIP MAN
We already have world war three in a can,
The average Londoner is photographed 300 times a day
One has to search over the hills and far away,
But fear not kind sir, that place still exists, the corner to be yourself, have total bliss
For we only need to peal away from the masses
where we can take off our mask, be free from the gases.
nice poem, I'm not a dentist; just an after-minded sole like yourself.
Peace and Love poe
Posted: Mar 9, 2008
Very intelligent i would say....in just a few lines you brought to light our real plight....Great Poem!!
Posted: Mar 9, 2008
An interesting poem. An excellent depiction of our modern times. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Alek Azrael
Posted: Mar 25, 2008
A believer definitely. hats off.
Posted: Mar 31, 2008
True. I do believe that this poem is very compelling. Makes me really think. Thank you.
Posted: Mar 31, 2008
great poem. how easily we have let technology take over our lives. who knows Big Brother may be watching us and we wouldn't even know it!
take care
snow
Posted: Apr 1, 2008
this sad and superficial world has taken us all over i'm afraid. and you expressed that beautifully.
a.p.xxx
Posted: Apr 2, 2008
Very good and inspirational. Jesus Saves
Posted: Apr 5, 2008
Fine poem.
Posted: Apr 7, 2008
I was in the grip of it 8 months back and when I decided to take a break and be with my 3 year old son for 2 years, , I found myself once again
Simple and powerful
Posted: Apr 8, 2008
Loved it =)
Posted: Apr 13, 2008
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