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HAIRSPRAY4x4x4x4x4x4x4RUMBLE - JOY

Poem By: poewhit
Poetry


THAT MAD MOMENT IN EVERY YOUNG GIRLS LIFE View table of contents...

 

Submitted: May 2, 2008    Reads: 197    Comments: 15    Likes: 4   


What are these fits.

My hair just won't make hits.

Girls all look at me.

Crazy glue - maybe help plee.

FRIZZY HAIR-prom day night.

What is this crazy plight.

HAIRSPRAY-HAIRSPRAY-prom night.

4x4x4x4x4x4x4x4x4 curlers won;t work.

RED & WHITE candy girl, says I'm a jerk.

PROM NIGHT-FRIZZYHAIR-NIGHT.

MOM'S JOY from the sink.

Slicked down-now in the pink.

HAIRSPRAY such a folly flight.

Nicknames now - JOYHAIR-

PROM LIMO - outside.

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JESUS SAVES


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Now in the Pink

guitar flame some kinda love
not writin
paintin It

such a folly flight,when these bricks fall in the blank writing i sometimes do....sorry..,

Great Text


Posted: May 3, 2008

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i just loved it......wow

Posted: May 4, 2008

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Rubbish. This is not a poem. Go fuck yourself asshole.

Posted: May 4, 2008

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hi! poewhit. it is something i experience occasionally. love it. ;-)

Posted: May 19, 2008

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I can soooo relate! try maintaing black hair!!! welld one!

Posted: May 29, 2008

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wot eric said was really mean. i like this poem

Posted: May 29, 2008

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Ugh
On my Prom night, a MILLION years ago, I think three cans of hairspray was used in my hair. And it took three weeks to wash it all out!!
Today, I don't use a thing in my hair. Sure, it's all crazy, but it's all natural, too!!
Very fun poem.
MA

Posted: Jun 1, 2008

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Heh. :]

Posted: Jun 8, 2008

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hair is mean to us isn't it?
><
*cries in corner*

Posted: Jun 8, 2008

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TRUE - THANK YOU

*SIDING WITH WANDIOLA*
And this is why black girls wear weave!

Posted: Jul 13, 2008

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Thought they corn-rowed - HAIRSPRAY

Cap'n Firecrotch
(not registered user)

Please tell me what is this 'pink' you speak of.
Call yourself a Christian and you're talking about your mother's 'pink'.

PS Your poem makes no sense. We love this site.
PPS We sold our souls for chocolate. Please pray for us.
PPPS Best damn chocolate ever.

Yours Truly,
Cap'n Firecrotch and "Sealegs" Barbosa

Posted: Jul 18, 2008

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THANK YOU

I think your poem was delightful. We all have those days when our hair gives us trouble. It made a smile come to my face. God Bless.

Posted: Sep 1, 2008

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Thank you

Love your style

Posted: Sep 26, 2008

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Great job I loved it..

Posted: Oct 25, 2008

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i liked it but i was kinda lost, tell i read it 4 times. but its good ^-^

good reading,

Amanda

Posted: Oct 29, 2008

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