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Submitted: Apr 23, 2008 Reads: 72 Comments: 9 Likes: 3
There she blows.
That coin of GOLD below.
Madman says, " to the boats ".
Harpoons tattooed man, and floats.
Starbuck, "the man's insane".
Walking on that hateful cane.
Run like mice, elmos vows of fire.
Boats away - into the sea mire.
Madman, that whale my hateful fire.
All is gone to the sea.
On a coffin a witness of thee.
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JESUS SAVES
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Yes,I like this one. Tells it well.
from miss mary
Posted: Apr 24, 2008
Nice one poewhit! :-)
Posted: Apr 24, 2008
Your're really witty, Poewhit.
This piece was like throwing a lot of different stuff in the mix to what comes out.
This one was strange, and funny, especially that first line "There she blows." One can read a lot into just that one line.
Posted: May 1, 2008
I liked it Poewhit....all ur writings seem to be inspired from GOD. And I love that feeling
Posted: May 2, 2008
hi! poewhit. u come across as a deeply spiritual and religoius poet. ;-)
Posted: May 19, 2008
I thought I'd never get through reading the book Moby Dick. So, I was ready for whatever with this poem. Luckily, it was an easy read and very enlightening.
MA
Posted: Jun 1, 2008
I love the ocean and everything that has to do with it, hence, all my fascinations with naval and maritime fiction....Just love it.....Great, awesome, engaging poem.....Needs a little polishing, though...
I LOVE that you put Jesus Saves. Are you a Christian?
Posted: Jul 5, 2008
a very good read ,
Posted: Aug 15, 2008
very nice :)
i read the book and loved it, and u really capture the major points of those last chapters very well!
Posted: Aug 23, 2008
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