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Submitted: Feb 1, 2008 Reads: 76 Comments: 15 Likes: 8
Sun crisp morning dews.
Laughter joy children spew.
Girls with fancy ribbon blue.
Men with jokes that seem so true.
Lovers holding hands with bliss.
Basket fulls of morsel bits.
Cheers reel the three legged race.
MOM'S apple pie, with fluffy lace.
The band plays with solid songs.
The sun goes down, not too long.
So the games come to an end.
PICNIC JOY walking home with a friend.
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ROLL ON SUMMER!
Posted: Feb 1, 2008
Hey ho!Summer days.
Posted: Feb 1, 2008
You know...I marvel at writers who are able to paint an image or a feeling, etc, with preciseness while not becoming too "wordy"...(as I do sometimes...sigh)
Reading you is always a pleasure...and a surprise...like opening a gift on a special day ! Touche'
JoKa
Evelyn
Posted: Feb 1, 2008
Awesome imagery! I havent been to a picnic in years, and I felt I was there!!
MA
Posted: Feb 1, 2008
I love this!
It describes an awesome summer day!
BLB
Posted: Feb 1, 2008
sounds so nice (smile) thanks poewhit
Posted: Feb 1, 2008
Very well written I realy was there and it prompted me into remembering summer picnis in days gone by. Thanks
Posted: Feb 2, 2008
This touched me Poe, great work.
Posted: Feb 6, 2008
it makes me feel the bright contentment of happy old golden summer days.
:)
Posted: Feb 9, 2008
Bullshit!!
Posted: Feb 28, 2008
Like it! Evocative rhyme. Nice one!
Posted: Mar 8, 2008
Lovely...a very nice description...enjoyed it a lot!!
Posted: Mar 9, 2008
forgot the sunscreen
ouch my skin!
Picnics at my age
do my in!
Nice one Poewhit!
Posted: Mar 12, 2008
I love aple pie. Reading this made me think of the fifties. the good ol' days.
Posted: Apr 5, 2008
This is nice, keep it up!
bibliophile
Posted: Apr 28, 2008
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