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PICNIC JOY

Poem By: poewhit
Poetry


Tags: poetry, poem

THAT TIME OF THE SUMMER View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Feb 1, 2008    Reads: 76    Comments: 15    Likes: 8   


Sun crisp morning dews.

Laughter joy children spew.

Girls with fancy ribbon blue.

Men with jokes that seem so true.

Lovers holding hands with bliss.

Basket fulls of morsel bits.

Cheers reel the three legged race.

MOM'S apple pie, with fluffy lace.

The band plays with solid songs.

The sun goes down, not too long.

So the games come to an end.

PICNIC JOY walking home with a friend.

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ROLL ON SUMMER!

Posted: Feb 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you

Irwin
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Hey ho!Summer days.

Posted: Feb 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Back then

You know...I marvel at writers who are able to paint an image or a feeling, etc, with preciseness while not becoming too "wordy"...(as I do sometimes...sigh)
Reading you is always a pleasure...and a surprise...like opening a gift on a special day ! Touche'

JoKa
Evelyn

Posted: Feb 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you

Awesome imagery! I havent been to a picnic in years, and I felt I was there!!
MA

Posted: Feb 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Them days

I love this!
It describes an awesome summer day!

BLB

Posted: Feb 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you

sounds so nice (smile) thanks poewhit

Posted: Feb 1, 2008

Author Comment:

No problem

Very well written I realy was there and it prompted me into remembering summer picnis in days gone by. Thanks

Posted: Feb 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Those were the days

This touched me Poe, great work.

Posted: Feb 6, 2008

Author Comment:

From you is getting a ribbon of astonishment

it makes me feel the bright contentment of happy old golden summer days.
:)

Posted: Feb 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Nothing like them days - back then

Bullshit!!

Posted: Feb 28, 2008

Author Comment:

You don't give anyone a break - COTTON CANDY - SODA - SQUARE DANCE - APPLE PIE BAKE - AND THE-----

Like it! Evocative rhyme. Nice one!

Posted: Mar 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you

Lovely...a very nice description...enjoyed it a lot!!

Posted: Mar 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Those were the days

forgot the sunscreen
ouch my skin!
Picnics at my age
do my in!
Nice one Poewhit!

Posted: Mar 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Those were the days. 57 ford conv.-beach surfboard full tank long haired girls

I love aple pie. Reading this made me think of the fifties. the good ol' days.

Posted: Apr 5, 2008

Author Comment:

My boyhood time - the good ole days.

This is nice, keep it up!
bibliophile

Posted: Apr 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you



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