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Submitted: Jan 22, 2008 Reads: 55 Comments: 12 Likes: 4
Just one more puff.
Quit - STOP - CRYING.
Want - GNAW - GNAW and GNAW.
Just one ciggy more.
Been over a month or so.
Just that GNAW - GNAW.
One tiny puff more.
Beat down the door.
Crawl on the floor.
One more ciggy - more.
GNAW GNAW GNAW.
It stopped by the door.
NO - MORE
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Evelyn
Posted: Jan 22, 2008
I like this one. Shows determination and the pain one has to go throught in trying to give up this habit.
Well done
Miss mary
Posted: Jan 23, 2008
Very interesting.
Posted: Jan 23, 2008
Very realistic, depicts the struggle very well.
Well Done!
Posted: Jan 24, 2008
LOL; 'just one more' ya that one more never ends...glad you quit, I did four years ago with not much trouble at all. I used a bit of self hipnosis; I didn't entertain the thought of smokoing when it came and plus I had really, really wanted to quit.
Posted: Jan 24, 2008
Thsi really could apply to any addiction....same feeling. Very good.
Posted: Jan 24, 2008
I quit smoking about 7 years ago. I was a pack and a half a day smoker. It was hard at first, the first month or two being the hardest. From time to time, I still think I want (need?) a cigarette. Not sure if it's a mental obsession, or if I'm still addicted after all these years of not having one. But you hit it on the nail with this poem, the struggle within of that JUST ONE MORE!
MA
Posted: Jan 24, 2008
VERY very very true-{"juuuust one more".
:)
Posted: Feb 11, 2008
you caught the emotions of a quitter.
Posted: Mar 2, 2008
She's a wicked mistress
Posted: Mar 7, 2008
I like your rhythm on this one.
Posted: Mar 13, 2008
I will show this poem to my little sister who is a slave of smoking. My husband succeded in quiting.I hated the smell of smoke not to mention the hazards of passive smoking.Being a doctor myself, I get so sad to see people so oblivious to the oncoming hazards.
well written, indeed.
Posted: Apr 3, 2008
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