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Submitted: Feb 11, 2008 Reads: 140 Comments: 21 Likes: 5
Its just a growing weed.
With funny little seeds.
Smoke has a funny odor.
I'M in a world of clover.
Like steps up heavens stairs.
Soon I have no cares.
My memory is full of wild hairs.
Where are the steps any more.
I'M on a cloud without any doors.
Out the window, I just stare.
I'm without any real cares.
My life just melts away.
Time passes, where are the days.
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wow-so true-it sounds sad-how life passes for those guys. i like the poem!
:)
Posted: Feb 12, 2008
How very sad. But yet so true. Life does seem to speed away before our eyes. It just reminds me that I need to live each moment to the fullest. :) Thank you for such a meaningful piece of literature!
-Cathy
Posted: Feb 14, 2008
haha-2 the comment on gals 2. haha! lol.:)
Posted: Feb 17, 2008
very good write Poewhit* 'I'm on a cloud without any doors' excellent!
Posted: Feb 19, 2008
I can appreciate the sentiments in this poem and life "melting" away when hooked on drugs.(or alchohol or eating disorders etc.) Nice one.
Posted: Feb 19, 2008
"Life just melts away"... ah, so it does for so many when every moment should be a natural, jubilant rush. very nice poem, well done.....Jerry
Posted: Feb 20, 2008
Rubbish.
Posted: Feb 21, 2008
most people need an escape, at least one so dreamy can promise a want for reality time and time again. any weed smoker on "a cloud without any doors" will eventually climb out the window just to be outside again.. I really liked the line "My memory is full of wild hairs"
Posted: Feb 26, 2008
Really liked this one
Posted: Feb 26, 2008
You really capture those moments between heaven and hell.
Posted: Mar 9, 2008
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Posted: Mar 11, 2008
Great*****
Nice work my friend !
Posted: Mar 15, 2008
Nice, some great lines. I always like been in the cloud with no doors once in awhile. Each to there own :)
Posted: Mar 24, 2008
the passing cloud. cool
Posted: Mar 31, 2008
Deep...
Posted: Apr 2, 2008
Pot smoking no gooder. KIDDING, I get the message. Drugs= Bad. Jesus= Good
Posted: Apr 5, 2008
I disagree with half of that...
It was a good poem, could have describe it a little better but good.
I know from personal experience it isn't always like that...
Posted: Apr 9, 2008
i get that was the perfect discription
Posted: Apr 25, 2008
wow this is really crazy!! lolz i like it.. thanx for the comment!!
Posted: Apr 30, 2008
so very true. too bad they never seem to realize this themselves. thanks for the comment.
Posted: May 6, 2008
that was really nice great poem
Posted: Aug 14, 2008
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