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Poem By: Poison Passion
Poetry


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a poem about how someone can use someone else View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 26, 2008    Reads: 38    Comments: 3    Likes: 1   


Everthing's clear now
You were only using me
Using me for your own malicious enjoyment
All I want to know is why?
I've done nothing but worship you
So why do you not realize
That we're meant for each other?
I will keep trying to show you
That we're soulmates
And I will keep hoping you'll notice
But if you never do, I'll be all right
Because I can do better than you
And I don't know why I haven't yet tried


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Comments:

Aww, so sad, but still, somehow is filled with hope. Very nice poem. ^^

Posted: Jun 28, 2008

Author Comment:

THANK YOU SO MUCH. I'M GLAD YOU ENJOYED IT AND THAT YOU FOUND THE SADNESS IN THE POEM.

Diz doez happen 2 a lot of woman in the U.S.
And i cant believe how men do diz 2 us!! (Itz juzt plain sad.)
Like it!!

Posted: Jun 28, 2008

Author Comment:

yeah, i know. i wrote it for a fried a while ago, but it applies to a lot of people.

A ty
(not registered user)

Totally true, men are animals. :( Nice poem!

Posted: Jul 1, 2008

Author Comment:

they so are, but it seems us women just can't help ourselves. thank you, im glad you liked them!



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