response to LeAnne's challenge. she gave me one specific word-sun-and i was told to write a poem with each ending word rhyming with the wordi was assigned. i hope you enjoy!! View table of contents...

Submitted: Aug 18, 2008    Reads: 41    Comments: 1    Likes: 0   

I lay on the beach in the sand and the sun

Playing around and having some fun

Squealing away as I begin to run

I discreetly pull out a water-filled gun

And continue on to spray my hun

And when the day is finally done

I know that I had some fun in the sun

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LeAnne

That was splendid, short and very funny and moving!!
Great job!
Thanks for the response to my challenge!!

Posted: Aug 20, 2008

Author Comment:

haha yea, i wanted to make it short and sweet, kinda like wat summer's supposed to be all about. anytime, i had fun!! tell me wen u post another!!

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