I accepted a challenge from Mystory to write a poem using six words. My words were forlorn, repeat, message, hunger, muttering, and prison. I hope you like my poem!! View table of contents...

Submitted: Jul 28, 2008    Reads: 25    Comments: 2    Likes: 0   

I got the message and I hate to say

My hunger for you took my breath away

I lay in my bed, so unbelievably forlorn

My love for you a prison, your feelings of scorn

And I tell myself that this you won't repeat

I keep muttering you will, because you are a cheat

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mystory

Of wow, short, but still extremely powerful. You did an outstanding job! Great work! =D

Posted: Jul 28, 2008

Author Comment:

yea, thought it should eb short and to the point. i used all the words though!! I'm so glad you liked it, and I really enjoyed the challenge!!

Rocky

That is a very wonderful poem, you must have a lot of poetry fans at home.

Posted: Jul 29, 2008

Author Comment:

haha, not really. i keep my stuff pretty private cuz im afraid of wat my friends will think. im glad u like it, though!!

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