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Teardrops on My Guitar-Lemonluv's Challenge

Poem By: Poison Passion
Poetry


much like my hero/heroine poem, I wrote another cheesy poem, this time about the song YTeardrops on My Guitar by Taylor swift. I hope you enjoy my corniness. Comment if you think of any other words u can use to describe my poem. it was fun, though!! View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 12, 2008    Reads: 29    Comments: 2    Likes: 1   


I don't know how you can't see

How much I love you

But you do not love me

You look right through me

Like I cannot be your girlfriend

As if I am a wall with no feelings

You are my friend Drew, the man I love

But all you talk about

Is your perfect girlfriend

And when you look at me

I fake a smile

So you don't see the pain I feel

But when I am home,

I hate to admit that you're the reason for

The Tear Drops On My Guitar


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Comments:

i like the lyrics to the song and you did a realll good job turning it into a poem!! lovely poem (i like corniness!!)
Lemon

Posted: Aug 12, 2008

Author Comment:

haha, thnx. i tried to base the poem on the song, so that it could show some resemblence, and it's nice to know you got the gist of what i meant. haha, me too, but some people dont. thnx for seeting up the challenge!!

I like the flow of this, corny or no, heartbreak and sadness too.

Posted: Aug 13, 2008

Author Comment:

haha, thank you. I tried to model it after the song, so I hope I accomplished that. So glad you enjoyed it!!
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