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WALK THE TALK

Poem By: Pratibha
Poetry


This poem is dedicated to my MOM...WHO has always followed in action what she taught us in theory....

When Lydia gave me the word - Walk the talk , a, b, and c...i could think of only MOM....

Then According to Mystory's challenge i got the word "SACRED" and i was delighted ....and decided to combine both the challenges into one poem...hope i do justice to it....

The narrator is MOM....JULIE is my name at home....hee hee...

the snap is of my son guiding my friend UMA's daughter safely through the hustle bustle of a busy town.... View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 18, 2008    Reads: 215    Comments: 44    Likes: 20   


WALK THE TALK, JULIE:

Walk the talk honey...altAlways walk your own talk...

Life is short......too short to brood,compare,criticize,whine,hate...

Make it HUGE, Make it worth living, Make it memorable...

Revise your a, b, c and d with me sweetheart...
Taught by us when you were a talkative and sensitive kid eager to grasp...

Come with me...take one step at a time and you would not lose yourself...

a = accept your blessings gracefully and be thankful to GOD for HIS mercy...alt

b = behave like the branch of the tree laden with fruits touching the ground...alt

c = control your WORDS, temptations, pride and anger always...they hurt souls...and GOD resides in the soul of each and every human...

d = devote yourself to your family, friends and duty...selflessly...like an oil lamp in darkness of night...alt

Do not worry about the tiny bud with you...he would follow your foot steps...

So, trust GOD and WALK YOUR OWN TALK...alt

Close your eyes and dedicate yourself in the sacred feet of GOD...

altYOU WOULD SEE LIGHT, YOU WOULD FEEL WARMTH AND EVEN WHEN WE ARE NOT THERE IN THIS WORLD...

THESE SIMPLE a, b c, and d’ s would always guide you through life’s darkest moments...always...

Now, go fly like an eagle without fear...alt

Footnote : I am so apprehensive regarding this poem...even a kid would write better...GEEZ, i Wish i could write poems which rhyme....mine are POEM-STORIES

I AM GRATEFUL TO ALL OF YOU FOR ACCEPTING ME GRACEFULLY AND WITH SO MUCH LOVE THAT I AM OVERWHELMED .....THANK YOU ALL...THANK YOU FOR NEVER MAKING ME FEEL THAT I AM NOT A 'POET' IN TRUE SENSE....I JUST WRITE TO EXPRESS....AND I DON'T KNOW TECHNICAL DETAILS....HOW I WISH I COULD !!

BUT WHEN I READ ALL OF YOURS RESPONSE FILLED WITH LOVE AND ACCEPTANCE, I GET ENCOURAGED AND THE CLOUDS OF DEPRESSION AND SELF PITY GET DISSIPATED.....LIKE THE STORM CLOUDS WHICH GET BLOWN AWAY BY STRONG WIND....IN MY LIFE THE STRONG WIND IS THE SELFLESS LOVE I RECEIVE FROM ALL OF YOU WHICH IS MY LIFE FORCE...


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Punishment
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Wow mom!
I love it very much. This is a very inspiring poem :)
The a, b, and c of life

Yes, yes, fly like an eagle without fear.
Wonderful JULIE :)

Take care!

Posted: Jun 18, 2008

Author Comment:

I WISH BUDDY...I WISH I COULD KEEP HER WORDS AND FLY LIKE AN EAGLE...I AM SO PESSIMISTIC AND SCARED OF HEIGHTS AND SKY.....

wow...just wow. An absolutely amazing piece. Good pieces advice too and I will definately take them to heart...
an awesome writing.
Take care

Posted: Jun 18, 2008

Author Comment:

THANK YOU SOOOOO..........MUCH .....UR COMMENT MEANS LOTS TO ME AND I KNOW YOU ALSO KNOW THIS....RIGHT????

Oh wow. I wish I had a mum like that. She sounds amazing. Lovely poem and name - I've always liked the name Julie-
~KAori

Posted: Jun 18, 2008

Author Comment:

THANKS KAORI....SHE IS INDEED VERY LOVING BUT I WISH I COULD BE LIKE HER....I WISH....

SHE SAID THIS BEAUTIFUL THING WHICH ALWAYS REMINDS ME TO CONTROL MY ANGER .....

SHE HAD TOLD ME ,' Julie, when you think about good things, your face would become likewise...pleasant BUT if you would get angry often and think about anger and unpleasant thoughts, be rude to others, hurt some one with harsh words....then slowly slowly your face changes from pleasant to unpleasant and slowly evil.'
i get so scared when i think about this and try to control my thoughts....

Wow that was amazing.I like the last line" Now, go fly like an eagle without fear"

Posted: Jun 18, 2008

Author Comment:

HOW I WISH RAYA .....THAT I COULD DO THAT......!!!

LIFE HAS BECOME A MIRAGE BUDDY.....

* WARM HUG*

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS UNCONDITIONAL LOVE FOR ME SWEETY

i love it, that's so nice that you dedicated it to your mom. great job.

Lydia_xxxx

Posted: Jun 18, 2008

Author Comment:

ALL THANKS TO YOUR'S AND MY STORY'S CHALLENGE BUDDY...THANK YOU....

Wow, so beautiful! I could have never come up with something like this. It truely is a beautiful poem. I love it. Very creative, and flowed really well. So sweet, too. Love it. ^-^

Posted: Jun 18, 2008

Author Comment:

THANKS BUDDY...THANK YOU FOR ALLOWING ME TO COMBINE IT WITH LYDIA'S CHALLENGE...THE WORD CHOSEN BY YOU FOR ME OPENED SO MANY DOORS OF POSITIVITY IN MY LIFE....

THANK YOU SO MUCH...I AM GLAD I JOINED UR CHALLENGE...THANK YOU AGAIN AND AGAIN....

U ARE GOD SENT AT THIS MOMENT OF MY LIFE...

Loved this. So true. The most important thing you can do for your child, or anyone in your life for that matter, is to be honest. Walk the talk, practice what you preach etc. Be true. Soar through the sunshine and the rain keeping eyes wide open.

Posted: Jun 18, 2008

Author Comment:

THANK YOU SO MUCH PHOEBE....GEEZ ...I WISH I COULD DO IT ALL THE TIME....MAY BE I AM ABLE TO DO ONLY 20-30% OF IT...I AM TRYING EVERYDAY AND I PRAY TO GOD TO 'GUIDE' ME....HOW I WISH I WAS LIKE MOM.....

THANKS FOR TRUSTING ME BUDDY....

That was amazing! I love how a lot of your writing is about God...so is mine! Haha you are awesome Pratibha...sorry if i spelled that wrong...anyways I love your style of writing! :) keep it up love zia

Posted: Jun 18, 2008

Author Comment:

THANKS BUDDY...YES....HONEY I AGREE WITH U...TALKING AND WRITING ABOUT GOD SOOTHES MY ACHING AND RESTLESS SOUL....

GOD'S DISCUSSION BRINGS SO MUCH TRANQUILITY AROUND US...RIGHT??

I HAVE TO READ YOUR ENTRIES SOON ....TO CONNECT TO GOD MORE AND MORE....

This was very good! Great advise, well-written, and I love the pictures that you added. Plus, I never would have picked you as a Julie. I like it! Now, I can call you that?

Posted: Jun 18, 2008

Author Comment:

YES YES....FOR SURE...U CAN CALL ME 'JULIE'....ALWAYS AND ALWAYS....IS EASY ALSO...LOL...PRATIBHA IS COMPLICATED AND EVEN I USED TO MAKE SPELLING MISTAKES WITH MY OWN NAME....LOL....

I AM CLOWN , ....HEE HEEE....

THANKS BUDDY....I WOULD SURELY TRY TO ADD MY ILLUSTRATIONS WHEN I HAVE MONEY TO GET A SCANNER OF MY OWN....THAT IS MY DREAM....HEE HEEE...

Aw I love this! Just the insperation I need Pratibha, I enjoyed the pictures too, great idea! Thank you for sharing this with us. :) ~ KB

Posted: Jun 18, 2008

Author Comment:

THANKS KB....U R THERE ALWAYS ON MY PAGE WITH LOVELY COMMENTS AND SWEET WORDS OF ENCOURAGEMENT....U R SUCH A KIND AND WARM SOUL....SELFLESS....
THANK YOU FOR BEING THERE IN MY LIFE....

WHAT HAPPENED TO MY EYES?? CANNOT SEE.....OH DEAR THEY R FULL OF TEARS OF JOY.....

gosh this was so awe-inspiring :D
i love this pratibha! its a beautiful eye-opener and gets my brain ticking. you have made a lovely, heartwarming poem!
keep up the fantastic writing ^^

Posted: Jun 18, 2008

Author Comment:

ALICE DEAR...THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS HEART WARMING COMMENTS....

MY EYES ARE GOING TO BE FLOODED NOW WITH TEARS WITH SO MANY ENCOURAGING COMMENTS FROM ALL OF U...THANK YOU....

Awwwww that was beautiful! I love this poem, so inspirational and wise, and ofcourse, very well written. Well done :D

Posted: Jun 18, 2008

Author Comment:

GEEZ....THANK YOU SO MUCH HONEY...THANK YOU....

I love the way you combine your writing into a poem-story, Pratibha, it's so creative and fresh! Very heartfelt, touching poem. I really liked it!

Stephanee :)

p.s. Don't forget to keep me updated when you post new writings!

Posted: Jun 18, 2008

Author Comment:

I AM SO SORRY FOR NOT BEING ABLE TO COME FIRST AND INFORM YOU...BEFORE THAT YOU WERE HERE WITH ME RIGHT HERE....

* a big hug for a lovely person*

HIYA BUDDY...I LOVE U FOR THIS HONEST AND SINCERE COMMENT...THESE COMMENTS WOULD KEEP ME GOING AND I WOULD NEVER AGAIN SLIP INTO DEPRESSION....GOD HAS SENT SO MANY FIREFLIES IN MY LIFE THAT I DON'T NEED TO BEG FOR HAPPINESS FROM PEOPLE WHO DON'T CARE FOR ME....

THERE R LOTS OF PEOPLE AROUND ME IN 'REAL LIFE' WHO DID EVERYTHING POSSIBLE TO BREAK MY SPIRIT AND I ENDED UP IN DEPRESSION AND WAS ON MEDICATION BUT THEN BOOKSIE HAPPENED AND I AM ION MY TWO TINY FEET AGAIN.....WITH FAITH AND LOVE AND ONLY EMOTIONS TO SHARE WITH ALL OF YOU....

i want to be a part of this writing world with all my honesty.....

thanks STEPHANEE......THANK YOU SO MUCH

Pratibha, there isn't one post that hasn't had a breath taking effect on me. You're such a warm person, and this puts such a smile on my face. I love it! a,b,c,d, I shall remember that. :) Thank you! ~ Nixie

Posted: Jun 18, 2008

Author Comment:

HIYA NIC.....U love me so much because YOU YOURSELF ARE SUCH A SWEETHEART BUDDY.....

MOM SAYS - GOOD PEOPLE ALWAYS FIND GOOD QUALITIES IN OTHERS and THEY NEVER FIND FAULT WITH OTHERS....THEY CRITICISE THEMSELVES MORE.....AND APPRECIATE EVERY PERSON THEY MEET AND IN THESE KINDS OF PEOPLE GOD RESIDES.....

YOU R ONE OF THEM....BELIEVE ME....

Poem-story, story-poem or expressions in words are ALL poetry to me! Poetry expands many boundaries.
So again you delight us with your words and expressions of life. Sheer poetic genius to me!

Posted: Jun 18, 2008

Author Comment:

ANNA PLEASE DO ACCEPT MY LOVE COMING WITH ALL SINCERITY FROM MY SOUL AND KNOCKING ON UR SOUL"S HOME....

LET ME IN too IN UR BEAUTIFUL WORLD OF PURE THOUGHTS

^_^ yes 'Julie' I love that name.

you are very fortunate to have amother who taught through example, that is the best way to teach. ^_^
haha, I love your mom and I don't even know her Lol.
well through you, you have let us know a part of her so special. Pratibha, this poem is fantastic! truly it is; a good poem comes from the heart, that's what you have done, you have written straight from the heart. your enthuism full of love and gratitude glow right through your work, and the art/pictures are incredible. Thankyou sweetie, see; what would we ever do without you? ^_^

Posted: Jun 18, 2008

Author Comment:

OH MY GOD....my cheeks have become so red with blushing so much....

KATIE....Mom always used to say "GOOD COMPANY GROOMS US" and that is what happened when I MET WONDERFUL PEOPLE IN BOOKSIE...

THANKS BUDDY FOR BEING THERE SELFLESSLY ALWAYS AND ALWAYS WITH KIND ENCOURAGING WORDS
I CAN "FEEL" UR PRESENCE AROUND ME ALWAYS.....

Everytime you post something for me, it's so kind and genuine, and that's how this poem is. And very true. It's inspired me to try and follow such wise words. Thank you for sharing this with me.

Posted: Jun 18, 2008

Author Comment:

*blushing endlessly*

GEEZ....never in my wild dreams did i think that all of u would like this....

i am indeed humbled by the responses....THANK YOU....

Pratibha,
Your words of poetry have warmed my soul. Walk your own talk really hit home with me. So many times my friends come to me for good advice about a situation, and in some ways there's 4 fingers pointing back at me most of the time. Sometimes I think we speak our own destiny, so I'm careful in my words, but yet I truly know I have no control over anything regarding my destiny. "Those who hope in the Lord will renew their strength they will soar on wings like eagles, they will run and not grow weary, they will walk and not be faint" Isa 40:31 This was a verse given to me since I was a kid. I have always kept it in my heart. Thank you for sharing your heart with me. You are a true poet. Your heart and soul is evident.

Posted: Jun 18, 2008

Author Comment:

I AM SO THANKFUL TO GOD THAT I MET YOU KRED....

ALL BY GOD'S PLAN, I AM SURE....I HAVE GOT A FAMILY BIBLE WHICH IS IN INDIA..COULD NOT BRING IT TO TORONTO DUE TO 'weight problems"....AND ONCE I GO BACK, I PLAN TO READ IT THOROUGHLY AND DISCUSS WITH KRIISH.....

I LOVED THE VERSES DESCRIBED AND THEY HAVE THIS SOOTHING EFFECT...THANK U SO MUCH FOR SHARING THIS VERSE WITH ME....THIS WOULD BE A PART OF MY AND MY SON'S LIFE AS WELL.....
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR SUCH A SWEET COMMENT FOR AN ENTIRE STRANGER....U R SO RIGHT WHEN U SAID ,'GOD RENEWS OUR LOST ENERGY'....TODAY I WAS MAD AT MY SON IN PARK BECAUSE HE PULLED OUT SMALL PLANTS WITH FLOWERS AND I SNAPPED AT HIM AND LATER CRIED.....BUT AFTER READING THESE COMMENTS, I AM 'NORMAL' AND HUGGED HIM AND ASKED GOD FOR FORGIVENESS.....

I like (in regards to your footnote) your unique style of poetry. Rhyme is good and I love it, but when you write in freestyle, it's good too, because you can get deep without trying to find the perfect rhyming word. And this was a good write indeed. I love the free flow of it, in a way that brings it all back together and I love the a,b,c, and d concept.

Thanks for sharing buddy!

Posted: Jun 18, 2008

Author Comment:

THANKS FOR THESE SOOTHING AND SOFT WORDS. ....

THEY INDEED ENCOURAGED ME LOTS.....HONESTLY....THANK YOU SO MUCH.....

behave like the branch of the tree laden with fruits touching the ground. what a beautiful thought! that is truely poetic. And don't worry about the tiny bud with you!! I love that!

I believe that this is my fav of all your writing.

Posted: Jun 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks buddy...I have become huge apprehensive about my writings lately probably because there are so many gems around me and i am a piece of glass....i hope my writings make sense and when people appreciate it,I am 'relaxed'....
THANK YOU SO MUCH...

Hello fan you are really doing a very great job here keep it up, we your fan are solidly behind you.
even though i don't come to booksie reguraly but i will always check for your writting any time i come
do take care of your self.

Posted: Jun 19, 2008

Author Comment:

DEAR EZEH....PLEASE KEEP ME INFORMED AS WELL BUDDY....I WANT TO BE IN TOUCH WITH UR WRITINGS ALWAYS.......

LOVE YOU SO MUCH.....

I'm glad i read this...as a young mother i sometimes paralyse myself deciding what's the right thing to do but your a b c and d are exactly the guidelines to do the best you can...

about your poem, you write like you are creating a gorgeous sumptuous cake with flavour and color - so attractive to look at it...even if i couldnt read i would enjoy your piece as an artistic piece of work...and you are so sensual in your choice of words - things to taste, smell and touch. Your wisdom is given even more power!

Posted: Jun 19, 2008

Author Comment:

*blushing *

this one has come straight from a MOM and has made it's home in my heart.....and soul....

* A BIG WARM HUG FOR YOU BUDDY*....


Thanks for touching my heart with this lovely, heartfelt piece, Julie.

NOW, I AM FLYING!!!!

Love and happiness.....Jerry

Posted: Jun 19, 2008

Author Comment:

THANKS JERRY....
*SMILING*
i am so happy that u liked it ....thank you....

AWWWWWW JUST TOOO SWEET!! your mother did well pratibha!! Wow im justy loving this!! well then better take a trip to the 'I like' button!!

oops almost forgot!! your son looks like such a gentleman guiding that little girl through the busy streets!! bless him.

Have a good Pratibha!!! xx

Posted: Jun 19, 2008

Author Comment:

THANK YOU SO SO SO MUCH HONEY.....

Gentleman ...YES and NAUGHTY....YES.....lol....

TALKATIVE......to the power of infinity and my brain gets fried most of the times.....

Hello pratibha,
i didn't read ur poem as a poem in a conventional sense because it is not, but nevertheless it has an identity and an integrity that is its own. You have truly written something that pays ur mother brilliant homage, she must truly be a gr8 mom(I knew that any way since she has raised a daughter who is not only beautiful on the outside but is a truly beautiful human being.) So i will refrain from nitpicking on this one, suffice it to say i was touched while reading this.
P.S never get depressed when you read other people's poetry, never think less of ur self. Everyone is unique and believe me only the unique people in this world survive in any field. Read "The God Of Small Things" by Miss Arundati rai or "Moth Smoke" by Mohsi Hamid and you will understand that all gr8 writers create their own style. So never compromise on that, ur words should be a reflection of ur soul and i am proud to say that in ur case they are.
Love Azmat.

Posted: Jun 19, 2008

Author Comment:

I don't have any words to appreciate how much ur comment helped me today. THANKS BUDDY....

I Do feel sometimes that my poems could rhyme.....

Hey, but after reading ur comment, YIPPY....i am so happy......


YYAAA BAAA DAAA BAAA DOOO.....

THANK YOU SO MUCH....

YOU R SO YOUNG AND U WRITE WITH SO MUCH SENSITIVITY AND "FEEL" for others.....

THANKS

I will surely read the novels u have mentioned....Books in Toronto are so expensive....i would buy them when i go back...but for sure.....

pratibha this is a really lovely piece of work. i loved your abc. you are not a piece of glass among gems you are a bright star shining along with many others. snow x

Posted: Jun 19, 2008

Author Comment:

THANKS SNOW....THIS WAS SUCH A HEARTFELT COMMENT.....FROM A KIND AND WARM SOUL.....THANK YOU SNOW...GEEZ I AM READY FOR WRITING NEXT ONE FOR KAORI'S CHALLENGE...I WAS FEELING SO LOW THAT I WAS NOT ABLE TO THINK STRAIGHT BUT NOW, I AM ENERGISED....
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR BEING THERE FOR ME WHEN I NEED YOU...

uma baskar
(not registered user)

Hi Julie,

I am really proud.......................happy to have a great friend like you! Wow any topic given, you simply amaze us with your writing skills. This one in particular simple to remember a, b, c, d and so much meaning attached to it, with nice pictures and of course narrating it as your mother talking to you. Oh honey, you are as usual my "SHINING STAR".

Personally, i should remember more about "C", i lose my temper very quickly, my mother has asked me to change this habit of mine, since childhood, but i am not able to, but it is high time to change as my daughter will learn from me- as you have rightly mentioned " the tiny bud will follow you" , my favorite line!

Posted: Jun 20, 2008

Author Comment:

If u think about "c", then I should think about myself.....I am worst than u buddy.....

U r a sweetheart....at least i have never seen u losing temper in front of me and when u do , there must be some real valid reason Buddy....i know that....u will not get angry unnecessarily....I AM SURE....I AM 100% sure......

Wow, I love ‘....control your words, temptations, pride and anger….’ If we could all do that, the world would be a much better place to live in, and we, much happier (and much less in trouble). And the eagle reminds me of my tattoo! Hee hee!! Talking of your footnote, poems don’t HAVE to rhyme, in fact, most modern ones don’t. The idea that all poems have to rhyme is an archaic one. If they do rhyme naturally, well and good, but if they don’t, there is no sense in forcing a rhyme and making it sound stilted. Language, after all, is a means of communication, and if you can communicate your meaning well and in a way that sounds beautiful, then you have a poem! Your poems sound like a soul talking to another. What else could you want?

P.S., I loved all the pictures in your poem except the ones with angels and a praying boy – they remind me too much of organized religion, which I am totally not in favor of since I think that a huge amount of conflicts in this world arise from organized religion. Of course, this is just my personal belief, and I certainly don’t expect people to agree with me.

Posted: Jun 20, 2008

Author Comment:

heee heee...regd Snaps, i knew u would say this about the angels one...heee heee heee.....

WOW...ur comment made me dance around with kriish .....THANK YOU SO MUCH URJA.....U MADE MY DAY AND NOW I AM CONFIDENT IN WRITING MY HEART INSTEAD OF BOTHERING TOO MUCH.....

hey! sorry for the late response! and this was really good it does'nt have to rhym to be good! I LOVED IT! :D

Posted: Jun 20, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks BUDDY...lately i have been apprehensive about everything i am doing.....

BUT all of urs comments make me feel confident again.....

YES i am POSITIVE AGAIN

What is poetry but an expression of our inner selves? We do not need rhymes and so many syllables and what-not to write a beautiful poem! You just have to speak from your heart and that is what you have done. You must have had a wonderful mother. I can see her love shining through you. The sentiments you expressed are a little humble for me, but I love them *tee hee* What exactly is lying low like the fruit touching the ground? I'm a little unsure about that one. Hmm.

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

Author Comment:

SURE Emily, i would explain that...

Mom used to say - GOD forgives everything except...PRIDE....

the branch of the tree which is laden with fruits is always touching ground...that is the person with true potential and credentials is always aware that he is what he is because of GOD....and so he always lives a humble life and is always down to earth....always helping others reach to the fruits on his branch....

But the branch which has no fruits always wants to reach the sky in pride...little does it know that he has no fruits....and GOD deprives him of all fruits always...it always stays fruitless ....THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR ASKING EMILY....UR HONESTY MADE ME SO PROUD OF U....MMMM UUUU HHHH AAAAAA

Pratibha, Your poem was more like a garden of flowers blossoming at the heart of summer. Revealing the true beauty within.

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

Author Comment:

WOW....Such a heartfelt comment from MY BUDDY....MMMMM UUUU HHHHH AAAAA....

*TIGHEST HUG*....

beautiful and inspirational lovely! you've truly outdone yourself!
Steph:)

Posted: Jun 22, 2008

Author Comment:

MMM UUUU HHHH AAAAA

Very nice poem-story Pratibha!

Your experimentation and sweet, loving tone make this poem great. I can't wait to read more. :)

Regan

Posted: Jun 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Dear Regan, I am indeed glad that u liked this poem. I don't know how to express my THANKS.

THANK YOU SO SO SO ...MUCH.

Inspirational in many levels. Extremely beautiful!

Posted: Jun 27, 2008

Author Comment:

THANKS BUDDY ...thanks a ton...
kind words of encouragement made my day....

Wonderful poem.Yes,people should follow God in every sence.Really great written! :)

Posted: Jun 28, 2008

Author Comment:

AND PEOPLE LIKE YOU NEVER GET LOST....

Hare Krishna!

The ABCD has new face when it comes to Pratibha Didi and it is always enjoyable and opens up the closed spirits within the mind.

Good work!


Haribol

Posted: Jun 30, 2008

Author Comment:

THANKS KRISH for making time for me...ur comment is very valuable for me...HARE KRISHNA

You Don't Have To Rhyme To Be A Poet. A Poet Is Someone Who Express Their True Feelings Like You Have. It Was A Very Touching And Beautiful Poem.

Posted: Jul 12, 2008

Author Comment:

I am so happy that all of you accepted my poems....i am so relieved and encouraged too...

if i think about how to make a poem which rhymes, i lose the track...hee hee...

hey i just love this poem. It is filled with so much wisdom, beauty and love. You are true poet in every sense of the word. You are inspiration and guilding light with your words. Beautiful words chosen and arranged wonderfully!

Posted: Jul 27, 2008

Author Comment:

such lovely and heavy words of encouragement...these words indeed helped me lots to think better next time...

These words are so beautiful! Your mother must've been an amazing person! as are you!

Posted: Aug 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks honey. U also seen to me like one lovely soul...GOD bless you

Heyyyy---woooah, are you kidding me? You feel like this isn't poetry? No way girl--if it came from your soul than it's poetry. This screams poetry to me sister. This is beautiful, true, full of life and passion. It's awesome and real. You're a GREAT poet, hands down. Keep living those A,B,C's k?

Posted: Aug 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Oh My GOD, U sure are one of the nicest person in this world to admire my poem so selflessly. Thanks honey.
I wish i could hug you tight...

true, life is too short, too very short...and i like it! Nicely done!

Posted: Aug 11, 2008

Author Comment:

i wish i could do it more often like mom....
these challenges in booksie made me think....so much
thanks honey for taking time out for me...

a wonderful poem and delightful artwork . really inspiring and a joy to read .
terry

Posted: Aug 21, 2008

Author Comment:

THANKS TERRY...what a surprise...THANK YOU...

This one was nice, an other of your beautiful and inspiring pieces of writing. It really made me smile, people should learn not to take in too much of what others think and instead just "Walk their talk"

Loved it!

Posted: Dec 20, 2008

Author Comment:

u r so young yet so ur comments are so mature and thoughtful..THANK U BUDDY

I will leave a short comment but one that says a lot,,,,Beautiful !!!

Posted: Dec 20, 2008

Author Comment:

THANKS ANGELA...ur short comment is meaningful AND sweet...



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