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Almost Never-Ending Heartbreak Pain

Poem By: prepPRINCESS
Poetry


This poem was written when I remembered the heartbreak pain I experienced when my boyfriend broke up with me. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Dec 1, 2007    Reads: 92    Comments: 2    Likes: 1   


 

 

At first, we were shy and not exactly the date type people,

 

But confessed our love for each other, so we decided to try it.

We started out, not knowing really how to go along,

But our love was so strong that it didn’t matter.

 

We sat together at lunch,

Talking and laughing.

We talked on the phone,

For hours on end.

 

People said we were perfect for each other,

And each day we became deeper and deeper.

When it got really deep,

We came close to kissing, but never did.

 

After that, things fell apart and you broke my heart,

It was like glass as it shattered on the floor, *crash!*

I never really shed a tear,

But I kept it bottled up inside.

 

I kept wondering for months why?

What was wrong with the love we shared?

Was I not good enough anymore?

Or did you just get tired of the dating game?

 

I found out later why you stopped loving me,

You thought we had nothing in common.

I was surprised, because we shared a lot of the same things,

Or was it all just a lie?

 

I still wonder, many months later,

Was your reason really true?

We’re friends, really good ones,

But whenever I look at you,

I still feel the heartbreak pain.


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Comments:

ohhh. i didnt know you still felt tht way! i'm sorry girl, but hey, there fr alot of other guys out there, i say, if he doesnt like you anymore, well it's his loss, you are a great person, and a great friend! luv ya gurl!

Posted: Feb 22, 2008

Author Comment:

I do still kind of feel that way, I mean, I'll always have feelings for him♥, but not as strong as they once were. I wish he liked me, but I'm not sure, and I'm okay without a boyfriend for now, so I'm doing my best to move on.

Sweet how u two r still friendz, but something iz telling me dat da boy told u a lie..If y'all had nothing in common, how in the world did y'all ALMOST kiss? Give diz poem an 8.5 out of 10.

Posted: May 31, 2008

Author Comment:

I don't understand why he said that either because we were alike in many things, but that happened last year, so I'm over it now. Thanks for commenting!



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