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Is this what they call afterlife ?

Poetry By: Psychosis The Tormented

A nightmare that made me think.

Submitted:Mar 20, 2013    Reads: 5    Comments: 1    Likes: 1   

In my dream

She kicked me till I fell

she whipped and tortured my mangled wounded body

and showed me who is the real Asphyxiation Demon Princess Succubus of hell,

when she had her fill of of what she thought was my misery

she gave the what was left of my barely alive carcass

to her twisted demoness underlings

They enjoyed what they thought was my sufferings

and desperate pleas for help

I has been tortured by these succubus so much

it was becoming almost disturbingly arousing

so when her minions were finally through

I looked up with and arrogant smile, (with what was left of my flesh torn face)

and screamed at the Asphyxiation Princess


A look of unimaginable/unexplainable rage fell upon her face

The fires of hell rose with a fury

and consumed the entire place !

with every step

I could see her anger grow as she came toward me.

now I wish I had kept my big mouth shut and just let things be

She ordered two of he minions to support me on my feet

she took a with hooks and wrapped it around my neck

in one jerking motion she yanked it and of me and when I fell again

have me 6 more lashes

and another hour of torture she began

After this time of torture she knelt down beside me and whispered in my ear

"You fucking disgusting worm your Hell is ten times worse than here !"

After she said that my eyes sprung wide awake

waking up from dreams like that make you body tired and ache

I went through the day trying to figure out what did she mean

when a series of of depressing soul scarring events and circumstances came my way

that made life almost unbearable and ripped peace and happiness from the seams

now I see what she was trying to say , there are worse places than hell

dying and coming there is not what I should fear

dying would be pointless

If I ended up back here.


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