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A few of my old poems i wrote a long time ago

Poem By: puddleofink
Poetry


um yah just random and old poems of mine...
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Submitted: Apr 1, 2008    Reads: 64    Comments: 7    Likes: 3   


...breathing is not an option its something we must do, breath is life and life concludes...

A crack in my tooth a story so blind,  today i am lost in all time.

Love waits for no one.

Brush away the silence,  take on the fear,  breath in the multidudes of love that is near.                                                                                                          Smother the weather, make your own. Pull on your boots,  walk alone.                                                                                                                                         Stumble in the darkness on a empty street. Listen to your heart.                                                                                                                                               NEVER SKIP A  BEAT. 

-Um yeah im pretty random             

I'm not near human, i'm quite far from that. A myth, a legend a spider on your back. 

What you looking at, nothings over here. So much time you've wasted. So much time you've spared. All the time you look,  you'll see nothing times a wasted, finding something. 

Come a little closer. See as I do. Were not the same me and you. 

-random as 

Caught up in a mosh pit my life spins like steel. Here i am trying not to feel.

This pain in my heart torn open by love is shielded away by the bright burning sun.

I seek for everything and anything that might heal my heart.

For today, I feel my life has past.

-um ok yeah most of these poems are really really old and bizzare and depressing and dark. and thate enough for now  so ya sorry if there not your cup o' tea!   - your friend  Renee                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      


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Comments:

It was my cup of tea! so neva mind! I thought it was good, why not right them all fully?

Posted: May 7, 2008

Author Comment:

a fully? you mean all propa and seperate nd stuff hmmm cant be bothered at the mo there pretty random but yay you like

They're hmm.. how to say..interesting. I an akward way but I liked it. I really did. I like different! That's my style. I always try to be the white dot amongst the gray dots.

Posted: May 8, 2008

Author Comment:

hay kool thanks yea i was pretty random and weird when i was younger so ah yeah thanks!

Wow, so unique, One of the best poems I've read on here. Bautiful choice of words, especially at the beggining. Brilliant poem! Thumbs up for you!
Steph:)

Posted: May 8, 2008

Author Comment:

um there kinda heaps of poems in one page so ah yeah i should edit a bit more.... thanks heaps for commenting!!

I liked the choice of words. =) Great job. =D

Posted: May 8, 2008

Author Comment:

hay thanks im glad you thinkso

I totally liked them. You are very ramdom, but like in a good way. I can't wait to read some of your new stuff.

Posted: May 19, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks i like randomness im all about randomness

No, I really liked these poems! I thnk you're a very good poet, really! You should keep writing! =D

Posted: Jun 2, 2008

Author Comment:

hay thanks heaps

They were relly good.I liked them alot.I love the rhyming in them.You rhyme pretty good.You should rhyme more if you don't mind me saying.Great job.

Posted: Aug 4, 2008

Author Comment:

um ok ill rhyme all the tym hehe that rymed



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