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Let's make a nest

Poem By: punne4e
Poetry


Thanks God finally I start it here. This poem of mine,dedicated to all of you
Such a lovely Guy’s & Gult’z,friend’s,brother and sister’s….gentlemen,simply only for u-that’s it.
Please rate it frankly and read it emotionally. Ok…! That’s enough to say this time,but I am sure and wanna do assure to all of u that in upcoming day’s, you will be find interesting and various type’s of
Content and things,when u visit here.
At last,salute to all of u guy’s those who stand with me,support to me and wanna read my writing’s,even
While there was nothing to read,too.
So this time just enjoy it and Feel At HOME onlinefamily at onlinehome. Your’s Vicky.punne4e
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Submitted: May 16, 2008    Reads: 191    Comments: 17    Likes: 9   


Let’s make a nest
Which is purely first,after million’s next

 

No matter, who has come

We feel pleasure
When we found to be there, some
 
Where all we are host and guest
Let’s serve, buddy our best’s best
 
Where all we together
No matter,day or night
It’s same in all weather
 
Here is no boundaries or barrier

Only matter who is id bearer

Writing level may differ,but place is same

Why we blame to any one,it’s our family member
With differ strength and name
 
Any bar,country cult sex richness race region or religion
Left it on those,who it’s prison
It’s neither a matter for us or nor a vision
 
Still we do mistake,again and again
It’s far away to learn from
Then think how to get profit or gain
 
So good to see you here
Chance’s are might possible
That good people are not to be here
 
Guy’s and gult’s, is it almost done
You know,well beginning is half done
 
So think good,try to give your life’s best
Left itself,to make the history from rest
Go ahead buddy, go…

Let’s make a nest

Which is purely first, after million’s next.


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Comments:

so sweet....thanks for making the day of this huge and rocking booksie family....

Writing level may differ,but place is same

Why we blame to any one,it’s our family member
With differ strength and name
lovely thoughts

Posted: May 16, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks sister, short but sweet comment i hope the same in future.

Your younger one- Vicky.punne4e

Ah, this is so sweet. Booksie is a home for me, I've been here for a long time now and your poem rings truth in every line. A lovely tribute. Thank you for sharing, Vicky. :) ~ Nixie

Posted: May 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks dear sister,atleast frankly,straight from your heart this one expect from u.your word really important for me,i need it.


Thanks God bless you.

hi! vicky. i'm getting the gist from this poem. u say it is one big literary family. and although all r different they stand together in their diversity. good work. ;-)

Posted: May 23, 2008

Author Comment:



^^ Thank you very much dear sister that you liked it. Thanks alot.

Yes we are all one.

VICKY.punne4e

Its nice to know our cultural diversity is our strength. Lovely poem.

Posted: May 23, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks saif but i think its too late when i going to write a reply.by the way i am soory i make it a point for future and try to give response in time.Well it's our cultural strongness.

thank u very much.
Your brother,friend-VICKY.punne4e

This poem's theme of 'unity in diversity' is its strength. Well done.

Posted: May 23, 2008

Author Comment:



^^Thank you Saif, yes its true "unity in diversity" is very necessary and we should follow it. by the way thanks that you liked its theme.


Your brother-VICKY.punne4e

You write very well the subject of being one has been brought out very well. Keep it up.

Posted: May 23, 2008

Author Comment:



Thank you very much Eliz for encouraging me. Thanks

VICKY.punne4e

Hellow Vicky. My dear you write very well. Of course I agree with your sentiments. Good poem.

Posted: May 23, 2008

Author Comment:



^^Thank you very much my elder sister, yes its true that we are one in unity.


Thanks a lot that you stayed here and liked it. VICKY.punne4e :)

Gosh I love it. You write well. Lol

Posted: May 23, 2008

Author Comment:



^^ Thank you very much that you liked it.

VICKY.punne4e

good poem. I was thinking what is right and wrong in this world; and what is morality.

Posted: May 26, 2008

Author Comment:



Thanks Arun JI, its itself a whole world.

thanks alot that you had been here and gave response.

VICKY.punne4e

This is very good. And soo sweet. It was beautiful

~mandy

Posted: May 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks mandy U like it.

Your brother-VICKY.punne4e

I love it! short and sweet :)

Posted: Jul 7, 2008

Author Comment:

^^Thanks a lot Zia!! I glad to know that you like it.This is my heart's feelings.

Thanks Again.
God bless you. Your brother-VICKY.punne4e

Very good poem! Short and so good =)
~Maple

Posted: Jul 10, 2008

Author Comment:



^^Thank you very much Maple that you liked it, and thanks for visiting here.


VICKY.punne4e

Hello Vicky...written from the heart...with a unifying thread.. using correct arguements ....only a good soul could have created this beautiful peice...thanks for sharing...impressive indeed.
Rahbar.

Posted: Sep 5, 2008

Author Comment:



Thank you very much Rahbar that you enjoyed and liked it yes it 100% true that i wrote it not from my heart but soul. The whole universe is our house and we are the children of our one father the Great God.

Thanks Again Very Much. VICKY.punne4e

Hi!
booksie has become like a family. And it feels great to be a part of it.

Posted: Sep 7, 2008

Author Comment:



^^Thank you Rio that you liked it and ya i also feel great to be a part of it.

Thank you very much dear sister!! VICKY.punne4e

Very Nice
As always.
I again came to read it.:)

Posted: Oct 8, 2008

Author Comment:



Thank you very much i surprised to see you here, well thanks a lot that this poem still attracts you to been here.


Your brother-VICKY.punne4e

Punne4e,

Although your use of the english language is somewhat different from my own, the meaning behind your words is always crystal clear. The spirit behind your writing radiates love and acceptance, which is obviously a magnet for those who have lovingly commented here.

What wonderful words!

Tim

Posted: Dec 8, 2008

Author Comment:


Thanks Tim!! for your touching words, yes you are right, that use of the English laguage is differ than you or others,the reason behind that i am a hindi medium student and nowadays i learn it, though i am not bad at it but still i feel unsatisfied with it,anyway you like it as others,thanks alot.

WISH YOU A VERY HAPPY NEW YEAR 2009
Your friend-Vicky.punne4e

MsShell
(not registered user)

sweet :)

Posted: Jan 24, 2010



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