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Something wrong Something right

Poem By: punne4e
Poetry


Hello Everybody!! How is life?
And what’s going good and wrong, nowadays in your life. May you all face’s these- Happy, Yum Yum!!, Delightful, cheering, Hip Hip Hurreah, Come on Charlie, Come on dear, Come on dad, come on mom and so on other lovely,encouraging,motivated Words.
Today, it’s my Fourth post here. This afternoon, when I was sitting on my studying chair, out of my house and enjoy the rain. I wrote this, and I think you like it as ever before my other writings.
All my best is always with all of you.
God bless you All. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 9, 2008    Reads: 62    Comments: 4    Likes: 2   


Something wrong, Something right

Nothing can always be right
It’s a complete circle
With half negative, and half positively right
 
Its God gifted life
One half down their shoulder, where other half fight
 
Like, dislike
Negative, positive
Wrong, right
Merit, demerit
Up and down
Day and night
An average wrong, average right
 
Is this poetry always be right
Some like and some dislike
The simple thing is…
May some part wrong of it
And other half may right
 
Today, it’s Rain Shower here
My soul felt something heavy, something light
Half people say, it’s good for weather and agriculture
Other half say
By this, now mosquito will bite
 
So, now what should do?
Don’t be worrying
Let’s enjoy it
Whereas our heart, pumping bright
 
It’s a part of life, because.... always
Something wrong, Something right


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hi! vicky. u ve stated a naked truth of life. life is a complete circle made of equal positive and negative. if there r rains, there r mosquitoes (eeks!). and what should v do - take the good along with the bad for thats a survivor.

an extremely interesting outlook on life. keep it up. lol. ;-)

Posted: Jul 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you bubbly very much for comment, i wrote it in my light moments,i want to write it more further but then i stop it and think that these words are enough to show and describe its theme so i stop it,well after it i wanna add two lines in its beginning which are- What's wrong or what's right
Nothing is wrong or nothing is right ,but...!!

But now its OK!! By the way how are you and i am really really sorry for not commenting on "money" and "egg" because its my weakness that i never do any comment or response when i am not sure or its not from my heart because i don't want to cheat,fool or play with others emotions.Well i want to tell you some good and free sites that offer to build a free website or wiki even with custom domain names like WWW.bubbly.com My exams are now almost at the near of end and after it i will fully move my head for website developing, i also describe it to Nic and she is interested and i wanna make a wonderful wiki site on internet and other great ideas that i wish to turn them real projects and yesterday i found a great web that fulfill that dream so what u think about it and would you help me and contribute in it tell me as soon as you can Please!!! Please mail me if you rely on me as your brother and send mail at punne4e@yahoo.co.in

Have a good day and god bless you.Your brother-VICKY.punne4e

So true, and you described it so well! I really like this poem, and can't wait to read more of yours! =)
~Maple

Posted: Jul 11, 2008

Author Comment:

^^Thankyou Thankyou Thankyou very much for comment,Yes its my personal view that there is nothing wrong or right even when we talk about our self then there is many merit and demerit within us,Am i right? I think again something.....!!
Yes you are right i have a more beautiful and meaningful titles in my hand that i want and will write by gods blessings and my fans/friends wishes.I will read your poem very soon.
By the way you miss my "God's Word" article please read it and listen its audio version its as per one of your choice "God" as i read at your profile that you like religious and god related writings and then i am sure you must read it.It will give you a complete peace of mind/therapy Please check it out now.
Have a very good day to you.God bless you.
Your friend-VICKY.punne4e

Oh my gosh, Vicky you have out done yourself with this poem! This is brilliant! I love the wrong and right and the i absolutely LOVE the rhyming! It worked a treat, every line of it. And also, the message you enforce is a good one, and how true, who really knows what’s wrong and right? It comes down to opinion anyhow, right? :) Great poem, love it! ~ Nixie

Posted: Jul 12, 2008

Author Comment:


^^Thanks Nic that you like it, well who knows whats wrong or right just left it on God, he is all in all and knows every bit of this Universe so we don't require to bother.

Glad you like it!!! Your brother-VICKY.punne4e

ah yes "our heart pumping bright" ^_^
I liked that the best,no matter what is wrong or right we must see through it with "heart pumping bright"
excellent little poem Vicky,
have a wonderful day
~katie

Posted: Jul 14, 2008

Author Comment:


^^Thanks dear Katie and very sorry that i didn't reply in time.
Well i am very happy that you liked it, yes pumping of our heart is very important.

Thanks once Again!! ~Vicky.punne4e



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