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Submitted: Jun 15, 2008 Reads: 61 Comments: 4 Likes: 2
RAIN
SO VAIN
IT POURS
WITHOUT RESTRAINT
RAIN
SYMBOLIZING PAIN
LIKE ASHES OF SUGAR CANE
DISAPPEARING WITHOUT A TRACE
INTO THE VAST NIGHT SPACE
RAIN
COME AGAIN
NEVER TO RETURN
IF ONLY TO REMAIN
NEVER TO REDUCE TO SHAME
AND TEARS FLOW
FOR NO ONE
AN ODE
TO RAIN
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i liked it. somehow its the darker side of rain!
Posted: Jun 16, 2008
this is kool but i love the rain and if the rain had a darker side i beleive this would be it i like it heaps tho so yeah yay!
Posted: Jul 15, 2008
This was neat. The way it was formatted and the short phrases made it more fun to read
Posted: Jul 22, 2008
I really like "ashes of sugar cane." I will never think of rain the same way again. :)
Posted: Aug 2, 2008
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