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"In For the Kill"

Poem By: RaisinGirl
Poetry


Tags: run, gun, attack, shot, country, kill

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Submitted: Jun 14, 2008    Reads: 34    Comments: 2    Likes: 0   


I guess you thought that I had been shot

by your words flowing out through your malicious mouth,

Well, listen up, boy, I am telling you now,

"you better put down the gun, and run for the south".

Cuz this country girl is all grown up

and she's boldly justified in taking over this town.

You better watch your back while you're at it,

or you'll soon find yourself facedown in the ground.

You never seemed to think for yourself, never believed in anyone else, never existed, just resisted, 'til you went in for the kill...

Well, how bold of you to attack,

Just when my back is turned, and I know that I am right,

Now you strut your stuff right in front,

But you better believe I'm not goin' down without a fight...


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more possible song lyrics...

Posted: Jun 14, 2008

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I really like it! Its got a funky feel to it. ;D
Nice work.. ^-^

~!~Megan~!~

Posted: Jun 14, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks Megan, I know the image I added has nothing to do with it, but I like dragons, so I picked a dragon battle(going in for the kill) whatever....



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