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Demon Love

Poem By: Rat
Poetry


Tags: love, demon

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Submitted: May 26, 2008    Reads: 58    Comments: 9    Likes: 3   


What are you
I need to know
You are a demon
And yet I love you
I love you like the air I breathe
Do you love me demon
Do you
You bring out the evil side of me
That I never knew I had
Yet you are so far away
Demon come get me and take me away
From my life
Take me with you
I want to stay with you
Demon come get me and
Save me from my sickening life
So with my last words I whisper
Demon I love you


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Ha! First to comment! ^^
Well, Kristine from the Phantom of the Opera did love the phantom whom she thought was the Angel of Music..

I love it rat.^^

Posted: May 26, 2008

Author Comment:

have you seen the Phantom of the Opera???? but yes you are right about the love thing thanks for reading it and i'm glad you love it.

i never watched the phanton of the opera, but i do like the poem. Question: would u really run away with someone who's a demon?

Posted: May 26, 2008

Author Comment:

yes i would run away with someone who is a demon as long as i love him and he loves me:] oh and he has to be a good demon too. thanks for reading

HaHa. I loved it. It made me smile... for some odd reason. *scratches head in bewilderment* Hmm.

Anyway, good job! :)

Posted: May 26, 2008

Author Comment:

lol i'm glad it made you smile but i wonder why it did. thanks for reading

Demons! Great one!
i never really thought about that!!
Fabulous!
!!LeAnne :]

Posted: May 27, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks for reading

it was a very good poem but sort of different but in a good way did you get it from ixluvx2xritex's story i did like it and i can't belive you would actually run away with a demon.

Posted: May 27, 2008

Author Comment:

no i did not get it from xluvx2xritex's story and yes i would run away with a demon as long as we both love each other. thanks for reading:]

Sounds like a poem about my ex, lol. Seriously though, I enjoyed the darker imagery, loved the write. :)

Posted: May 27, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks for reading i'm glad you liked it:]

I like it, but I don't get why everyones like "why would you run away with a demon?"
Come on, the more dangerous, the more exciting. lol.
It doesn't really matter who they are, as long as they love you and you love them.... and they don't go on random killing sprees at your school I guess. ^_^. j/k

Posted: May 27, 2008

Author Comment:

LOL and yes i agree about the more dangerous the more exciting thing:] asn yes as long as i love him and he loves me i will be happy and yes as ong as he dosnt go on a random killing sprees as school i will be fine:] thanks for reading:]

Sounds familiar... Like that story I gave you.
"WHAT THE HELL IS HE!" -Rat
"I dont know..." -Jessy

Posted: May 29, 2008

Author Comment:

HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! i love that story:] and it dose not ring a bell from your story...ha

This is a good concept for a short story! nice one!

Posted: May 31, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks for reading



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