The Island of Sadness

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Poem By: Rat
Poetry

Tags: island, sadness, rat, mystory, challenge

this is mysory's challenge and my two words where island and sadness so i hope i did good in using them. please tell me what you think of the poem when you are done with it. View table of contents...

Submitted: Jun 18, 2008 Reads: 62 Comments: 6 Likes: 3

The Island of Sadness

I walk along your shores

Every day and yet

You don’t wash away how I feel

That is why they call you

The Island of Sadness
All you do is take our pain and suffering

And turn them against us

Some of us make it off of you and some

Of us are lost in our despair you make us feel

You are the island

That doesn’t have water

Or food

And most of all happiness

All you do is make us feel the sadness

That is inside ourselves

One day I promise I will have you

Give someone happiness when

They walk on your shores

And then they will not call you

The Island of Sadness but

The Island of Drams

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Comments:

mystory

Wow, this turned out so good! I love the whole 'island of sadness' concept. Very creative. I love it. Very good job. =]

Posted: Jun 18, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks and i'm glad that i tried your challenge plez tell me when you have another one:}

Prizemoney0135

Like mystory said. Like it!!

Posted: Jun 19, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks for reading

darlingILY

ooOoOooOoo.
I like it a lot. =]

Posted: Jun 28, 2008

Author Comment:

lol thanks

Olwen

Wonderful work Rat..I would have questioned at one time the love for a rat or a vampire...you could call me farret because she is my baby..so sweet..like your poem..chow Olwen

Posted: Jul 7, 2008