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this is mysory's challenge and my two words where island and sadness so i hope i did good in using them. please tell me what you think of the poem when you are done with it. View table of contents...
Submitted: Jun 18, 2008 Reads: 62 Comments: 6 Likes: 3
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Wow, this turned out so good! I love the whole 'island of sadness' concept. Very creative. I love it. Very good job. =]
Posted: Jun 18, 2008
Like mystory said. Like it!!
Posted: Jun 19, 2008
ooOoOooOoo.
I like it a lot. =]
Posted: Jun 28, 2008
Wonderful work Rat..I would have questioned at one time the love for a rat or a vampire...you could call me farret because she is my baby..so sweet..like your poem..chow Olwen
Posted: Jul 7, 2008
Hei, I loved the whole concept of this poem! O_O
Wonderful read too.
Take care^_^
Posted: Aug 18, 2008
Lovely...but it could be longer!
:)
Posted: Aug 27, 2008
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