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Submitted: Aug 25, 2008 Reads: 36 Comments: 5 Likes: 4
evilBot roams this very earth
evilBot's trails are marked not far from your hearth
evilBot aims to destroy our planet, while-
evilBot's friends dig up some granite (don't ask me why)
evilBot desructs, destroys, disarms our world
He locks his evil mind up in a whirl
I don't remember the rest of this poem
You can laugh and say that I am solemn (why? no clue)
evilBot mocks my horrid poetry
evilBot runs away from his treachery
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i just realised most of my poems mock myself and my horrid poetry skills... perhaps i should try a haiku...
Posted: Aug 27, 2008
Yaaaaay! Nobel Prize winner; RazzleColaYing!
>In robotic voice< I AM eVilBot. I am very evil, and am a robot.
Posted: Aug 29, 2008
hi! ying. even randomly, u've made the evil robot a center of attraction. the poem flows well. keep it up. lol. ;-)
Posted: Sep 3, 2008
Wonderful job Ying! I thought it was very well written, with accurate punctuation, too. I like your style, it's unique and the little quirks that you add, like for example this poem about the "evil robot" is definitely cool =) Nice work, and any time I'd love to read your work, let me know when more is posted! =)
~Maple
Posted: Sep 9, 2008
Robotic voice: Wow zat vas funtastic. I luved it. I sink I am a friend of ze vil lobot.
:D
~loliee11
Posted: Sep 25, 2008
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