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My poem for the little contest me and Apple(poet3) are doing.. may i warn u that voting for her results in death.. lol just kidding but not really!:) View table of contents...
Submitted: Apr 7, 2008 Reads: 62 Comments: 6 Likes: 4
Her blade slices through her foe
With out hesitation she fights
Thrusting at the chest of her opposer
Smiling at their fall
Jumping though the air
Falling into battle
Tears fall from her eyes
she knows he wont love her
she knows he cant love her
but still
she protects him
and his
Soul
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Here is the picture i was given !
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Perhaps the title could be "Loveless Protector"? Your poetic challnge sounds interesting?? Are you given a picture and then supposed to turn it into a poem - I'm curious? For a change of pace you are welcome to read my new haiku(s) about lavender.
Posted: Apr 7, 2008
Hehehe, liked this one... hmmm, now I'm a little worried I might loose! :O Heheh!
Posted: Apr 7, 2008
this is really good!!! i liked your interpretation!! so apparently i'm supposed to judge you and Poet 3, but i don't know exactly what i'm supposed to do!! But i liked your poem! (but i also liked poet 3's) haha.. sorry!! anyways yeah! :)
Posted: Apr 8, 2008
.....im sorry Reaper.... [falls to the ground in tears from laughter]
OWW!!! My side hurts from laughing.... why did you put me in this position? HAhHAHAHAHAHAhAhahAh!!!!!
Um... i vote for Apple... It took a while to decide because they are both good and i really loved BOTH ideas. Those are cool pictures and i dont know whether i could have thought of something... but i vote for Apple [lionheart flinches]
Posted: Apr 8, 2008
Hey guess what I finally got Apple to send me the pic for hers and I decided that you get my vote!
Your picture and poem just pulled me more that hers, her picture gave me a different vibe than her poem did, so yeah.
Yeah for you.
~DarkFairy~
Posted: Apr 19, 2008
Wow! Unrequited love... the worst sort of pain imaginable! Great work Reaper... naturally! ;-) MD
Posted: Jul 18, 2008
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