Random First Lines: Chapter 17- Genox vs. Nina“Fine. We'll go right to Round 2. Who wants to fight next?” Nina asked as... : Fantasy » Read

Welcome Visitor: Login to the siteJoin the site

Only one thing

Poem By: Reaper
Poetry


Its a poem about a couple engaged in a love fight.

Blue = the guy
Pink = the girl
Purple (blue + pink)= Both of them! View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 15, 2008    Reads: 72    Comments: 11    Likes: 3   


Oh baby I see that twinkle
in your forest eyes
and I think to myself
are you an angel in this
earthly disguise?

* * *
no darling I’m no angel
I’m not form the skies.
You’re the one from heaven,
a gift from up high!

* * *
But you are perfection
not a fault through your hair!
You are so awesome
that is as swear.

* * *
no, I’m far form that,
not what you describe.
You’re the one with Knowledge
you’re the real prize.

* * *
You are so beautiful
with your luscious red hair
your sweet little face
carries love through the air.

* * *
no I’m not that great
you’re the one,
with the gorgeous face

* * *
Oh baby please just accept
your the perfect soul.
With your stunning face,
and your
mouth watering taste.
* * *
ok sweetheart,
but only one thing matters

* * *
what?
* * *
that is I
* * *
Love

* * *
You


3

Email this story Email this story | Print Story Print Story | Add to reading list

Comments:

Those last few words say it all.

Posted: Aug 15, 2008

Author Comment:

:)

LOL! This is great Reaper! Your talent is so diverse… short stories, poetry and now we see a glimpse of your art! Is there nothing you can’t do when you set your creative mind to it? ;-) Take care! MD

Posted: Aug 15, 2008

Author Comment:

movies, i cant make good movies, believe me i have tried :P Thanks for the comment MD

great poem, reaper! i love the whole thing. expeciallythis part:
"no darling I’m no angel
I’m not form the skies."
i thought that part had a lot of meaning to it.
keep on writing!

ps: that is a really cool picture at the top.

Posted: Aug 15, 2008

Author Comment:

:) the first 2 parts the best, that line you mentions is also one of my favs!

PS: Thanks :)

Wow. I really liked that. It had a pleasant simplicity to it, with an added twist. Very well written Reaper. The purple at the end made me smile. Makes you know they're speaking together in unison. Thanks for this, and keep going!

Posted: Aug 16, 2008

Author Comment:

:), that's what the purple is meant to do :) I'm glad it made you smile and that you liked it!

nice.

Posted: Aug 17, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks.

Any Girl would want to hear that from a boy. lol I would. Very very good Love it all the way.

Posted: Aug 20, 2008

Author Comment:

:) thanks

Aww, that was very sweet, on how the emotion was expressed through their words and so on...great work here!

Posted: Aug 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks, im glad you liked it!

Hey did you draw that picture Reaper? lol, if you did, amazing job, if not, it's still amazing!

But I really liked this one! :D I mean, seriously.... This is one of my favorite poems in the world now! :D

Thanks for writing it Ben! :D

~Apples~

Posted: Sep 7, 2008

Author Comment:

Yes i drew it, took about an hour but worth every second i think. One of your fav in the world? really? don't thank me for writing it, let me thank you for reading it!

Calm down there. It is really good poem. Beautifully written and imagery was just... wooh. LOL but i don't like that much praise of a girl because i've read in psychology of how it works and believe me the thing you are in is not as good as it looks :p Don't mind me...

Posted: Sep 24, 2008

Author Comment:

ha ha, I know i know often the drop dead gorgeous one are *** but not all the time! :) Thanks for the comment!

Lol .
I read this over and over again .
And it's GREAT!!
lol .
Awesome Job (:

Posted: Oct 6, 2008

Author Comment:

:) Thanks Chumb, feel free to come back and read it whenever.

ahha !
second time round .
I'm still reading this for some reason .
lol .
I love this poem .

Posted: Oct 9, 2008

Author Comment:

:) I'm glad you like it enough to come back :) That means allot.



Add Your Comments:

Your Name:

Spam protection control::

© Copyright 2008 Reaper All rights reserved. Reaper has granted theNextBigWriter, LLC non-exclusive rights to display this work on Booksie.com.

Add to Reading List
Become a fan
Email this story Email this story
Read/Write Reviews Read/Write Reviews
Print Story Print Story



Other writing by Reaper blood and water Dragon Racer Death by dawn part one More..



Tags

Love, Poetry, Death, Life, Poem, Romance, Pain, Fantasy, Hope, Sad, Sex, Hate, God, Horror, War, Humor, Hurt, Sadness, Loss, Dark, Fiction, Depression, Heart, Family, Friendship.

About | News | Contact | Your Account | TheNextBigWriter | Advertise

© 2008 TheNextBigWriter, LLC. All Rights Reserved. Terms under which this service is provided to you. Privacy Policy.