Bad Advice Haiku 2

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Poem By: Richard Elliott
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Tags: haiku, relationships, advice

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Submitted: Apr 19, 2008 Reads: 54 Comments: 3 Likes: 3

Be thin for your man.

Smile. Be coy. Agree with him.

You will get respect.

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Comments:

Anna Therese

That was funny - yet not so funny! Some men actually think this way??

Posted: Apr 20, 2008

Author Comment:

And some women do too - this is kinda meant to be the voice of an unenlightened older woman, I think.

L A Gardner

My jaw dropped and I burst out laughing! This is great in a "what the frik?!" sort of way

Posted: Apr 23, 2008

Author Comment:

Glad it struck a chord! Thanks for reading!

Kinkyboots

Ha, I like it! It's like reading a girly mag! :) ~ KB

Posted: Jun 3, 2008

Author Comment:

Now that label can cover one of two distict publishing genres! The one I think you mean is what I was going for, though. Beware the agony aunts! Thanks for reading, KinkyBoots!

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