CIRCLE OF A FOOLISH MAN
Running man gets weary
Weary man finds rest
Rested man gets cheery
Cheery man feels blessed
Bless-ed man grows lazy
Lazy man gets poor
Poor man he goes crazy
Runs out of the door
(BACK TO TOP & REPEAT!)

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Submitted: Jun 29, 2008 Reads: 41 Comments: 7 Likes: 4
CIRCLE OF A FOOLISH MAN
Running man gets weary
Weary man finds rest
Rested man gets cheery
Cheery man feels blessed
Bless-ed man grows lazy
Lazy man gets poor
Poor man he goes crazy
Runs out of the door
(BACK TO TOP & REPEAT!)
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As usual Ricky, very entertaining and skillfully crafted.
Posted: Jun 29, 2008
Just how many times will a blonde wash her hair??
LOL
Anyway, very amusing piece.
MA
Posted: Jun 29, 2008
Hah! And that really is the truth, and I can relate. What a great poem Ricky! ~ Nixie
Posted: Jun 30, 2008
Good work Ricky!
Posted: Jul 5, 2008
Great poem!!
Posted: Jul 11, 2008
thats kool as.
ah i like it
xx.
Posted: Jul 18, 2008
Ha :D it was funny because it was true!
Very original :)
Posted: Jul 31, 2008
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