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CIRCLE OF A FOOLISH MAN

Poem By: rickyengland
Poetry


I became interested in the idea of a circular piece of poetry,and came up with this.... View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 29, 2008    Reads: 41    Comments: 7    Likes: 4   


CIRCLE OF A FOOLISH MAN

Running man gets weary

Weary man finds rest

Rested man gets cheery

Cheery man feels blessed

Bless-ed man grows lazy

Lazy man gets poor

Poor man he goes crazy

Runs out of the door

(BACK TO TOP & REPEAT!)


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Comments:

As usual Ricky, very entertaining and skillfully crafted.

Posted: Jun 29, 2008

Author Comment:

Cheers. It was tricky to get all the last words of the lines to rhyme and keep the thread of the story going. Otherwise it would have been longer! Will keep an eye on your writing.

Just how many times will a blonde wash her hair??

LOL

Anyway, very amusing piece.

MA

Posted: Jun 29, 2008

Author Comment:

THANKS! It was fun to write too.

Hah! And that really is the truth, and I can relate. What a great poem Ricky! ~ Nixie

Posted: Jun 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Cycles of behaviour...sometimes hard to break. Thanks for commenting Nixie.

Good work Ricky!

Posted: Jul 5, 2008

Author Comment:

Glad you like it Brian.

Great poem!!

Posted: Jul 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks Susan. There was only so far I could go with this, because of the challenge of writing a circular story.
Pleased you liked it anyway.

thats kool as.
ah i like it
xx.

Posted: Jul 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Hi Nikki. Just got back from holiday today, and it was nice to find your comment waiting. Appreciate it. Ricky.

Ha :D it was funny because it was true!
Very original :)

Posted: Jul 31, 2008

Author Comment:

Hi and many thanks for your comment. Keep up the good work yourself! Ricky.



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