ELEPHANT
Mighty jungle beast,
Giant feet on trembling earth,
Dust clouds all around!
Huge ears flapping flies,
Marching with a battle cry,
Fearing only mice.
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ELEPHANT
Poem By: rickyengland
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A Double-Haiku about the big beasties. View table of contents...
Submitted: May 8, 2008 Reads: 43 Comments: 5 Likes: 3
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Comments:
Very cute!!
And I love the color.... Matches the elephants to a tee!
Love it
MA
Posted: May 8, 2008
Good work Ricky!
Posted: May 9, 2008
Your color wash choice is 'deeeeelightful' as is your double haiku. A fun, very enjoyable haiku, Ricky!! Happy writing.....Jerry
Posted: May 9, 2008
HaHa, yes like MA said, the color scheme, great thinking and then also the BIG words to match a BIG animal :D
the double Haiku itself was GREAT!!!
so enjoyable Ricky, so glad your back into :D
~katie
Posted: May 9, 2008
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