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Submitted: Jul 30, 2008 Reads: 54 Comments: 14 Likes: 8
THE REMEDY OF LOVE
When his kisses
Taste the salted tears
Upon her saddened lips
Then slowly,
Her cold heart melts
And she is stolen
From her past
When his hands
Caress her slender form
As naked limbs entwine
Then quickly,
Her pounding heart
Will soon forget
Why she was ever sad
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well, if I were sad at all I'm not now ^_^
how quickly we can forget pain when in pleasure we remain ^_^
nice Ricky, hows your summer?
~katie
Posted: Jul 31, 2008
If only it were that easy. Maybe years ago.
Nice.
Posted: Jul 31, 2008
Nice work here, Ricky, making it a lovely read. Yes, I remember those days...
a shame it is now only a memory.....Jerry (^_^)
Posted: Jul 31, 2008
The remedy of love....The remedy of a heartache. It still works, doesn't it.
Ricky, this is beautiful and sad all at the same time. He kisses away her tears, does he know why she's sad?
MA
Posted: Jul 31, 2008
Very romantic but different. The perfect remedy, love will take away her sadness. Very very nicely written. (I have some new poems up as well, I am tending not to worry people to read them by putting comments on their pages)
Posted: Jul 31, 2008
Aw, I think this is very sensual and sweet Ricky. It's amazing what comfort another person can have isn't it. Love this one! ~ Nixie
Posted: Aug 1, 2008
I agree with all of these comments, very nicely done Ricky. Like Nixie, I echo the sentiment and think it is amazing, the comfort we feel in the arms of someone that we love. Great job, Ted
Posted: Aug 1, 2008
Ricky, this is a beautiful and well-written poem. It is simple but yet it contains so much heart and motivation. You give off the notion that you are a very experienced writer and it definitely shows in this one. I really love it! Take care, Regan
Posted: Aug 2, 2008
Nice thoughts Ricky!
Posted: Aug 3, 2008
I really like it. Really smooth...the touch and kiss of a love always seems to make the sadness and pain ease. Really good piece.
Posted: Aug 3, 2008
Nice poem. Great job!
Posted: Aug 4, 2008
keep it up. Top notch. slainte
HLM.
Posted: Aug 18, 2008
'Stolen from her past' - how accurate.But is it always such a welcome theft?
Posted: Aug 19, 2008
Beautiful poem harks back to a time when love and poetry went hand in hand.
Evelyn
Posted: Oct 9, 2008
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