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Submitted: Jun 25, 2008 Reads: 46 Comments: 15 Likes: 10
THE SEASONS MARCH
Life is but a fleeting dance,
Of pleasure, pain, or wild romance
A dance of days, till kingdom come
A beating heart, a pounding drum,
And as we chase the rainbows arch,
With every breath the seasons march
This life is but a fleeting dance
Of pleasure, pain, or wild romance
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Back with a Bang Ricky! and such a good poem. Love it.
Posted: Jun 25, 2008
lovely Ricky, I like it.
Posted: Jun 26, 2008
oooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh,
Ricky,, I so enjoyed this read!
oh, it really made me feel good :D
Thankyou, and bless your heart.
~katie
Posted: Jun 26, 2008
Oh, wow, Ricky. Beautiful.
I was watching the sunset earlier with my two daughters (it's beautiful out here in the country), and was thinking to myself, no two sunsets are alike. Like your poetry, they're all beautiful, colors varying, the senses heightened, and yet they are all so different.
MA
Posted: Jun 26, 2008
wow, remind me to read more of your stuff, lol. I loved it. "Life is but a fleeting dance" *sigh* this was really lovely!
Steph(:
Posted: Jun 27, 2008
Wow! It's a great poem. Great job!
Posted: Jun 27, 2008
This is a memorable poem - one to endure the ages. I can imagine it being taught in a school room because it is so rythmic, perfect and says something about life.
Posted: Jun 27, 2008
So true, good piece Ricky.
Posted: Jun 28, 2008
Just plain levely. A gentle, calming, light and airy poem that speaks to all ages. Well done, Ricky!!
Happy days.....Jerry
Posted: Jun 28, 2008
What a great poem. I liked it. The words were powerful.
Posted: Jul 1, 2008
wow. i must admit this reads like a classic, the flow is perfect and a delight to read, it seemed like so many ideas into a short piece, it really impressed me, i feel that the line of " of pleasure, pain or wild romance" is just amazing, it really feels like the clincher. like a line you'd remember from a classic poem, you captured the fleeting life of humans and also its beauty because of it, well done stunning writing freind!!!
Posted: Jul 1, 2008
Love it love it love it!
Posted: Jul 5, 2008
As the flower fades and grass wilts so does this physical life. Though the outward man perish, the inward man is renewed day by day. Love your poem.
Posted: Jul 11, 2008
Yikes Ricky! I actually found this quite unnerving.Think it must be the dizzy pace - life is short indeed.
Posted: Aug 19, 2008
Great stuff, Ricky! I wonder if October was reminded of the rituals in the Wickerman?! It certainly has that paganistic feeling of being swept away by the power of nature, an effective Spring in its step!
Posted: Aug 27, 2008
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