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Gucci Shoes, Gucci Blues

Poem By: rosenoire87
Poetry


Tags: gucci, shoes, fashion

My second attempt at a poem. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 11, 2008    Reads: 42    Comments: 6    Likes: 2   


They were supposed to make me feel complete.
Taller to reach my satin draped pedestal,
looking down at mere mortals below my feet.
No- mere fashionless low class mortals.

The scent of leather fills the air,
I slip my feet in, walk around, nothing happens.
No magic here.
For $1,390 I have commited such sins:

Ghazal in Iran could have been in school when the bomb tore up the market,
Urvi in India could have received emergency treatment for her asthma attack,
Chilemba in Kenya could have bought anti-malarial pills and nets,
Cinta in Indonesia could have helped her parents build their house back,
Ishaq in Egypt wouldn't be selling bottled water out on the street,

And I wouldn't have these powerless Gucci shoes on my feet.


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Comments:

I thought this was very powerful with the acrostic stanza at the end. It's a statment against the convictions of a careless society, the majority. Great job!

Posted: Jul 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks! =)

Very intresting I liked it alot.

Posted: Jul 11, 2008

A thoughtful socio-political commentary. The final line great.

Posted: Jul 12, 2008

very powerful. a great way to explain our careless and materialistic society. well done:D

Posted: Jul 12, 2008

hi! rose. this is a bomb of a poem. if everyone sported such altruistic thoughts, brands'll be a thing of past and world'd be an equanimous place to live in. i like the thought. lol. ;-)

Posted: Jul 23, 2008

Author Comment:

lol thanks! I strongly believe so too =)

This so cool. I luv it

Posted: Sep 6, 2008



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