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Blown Away

Poem By: S Nayar
Poetry


Trying to control one's emotions isn't always easy. Here is my litle attempt... View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 15, 2007    Reads: 55    Comments: 1    Likes: 1   


i can feel the clouds gathering
stormy, sorrow-filled thunderheads
the raindrops filling the tanks of my eyes
the wind and the rain surging up my lungs

it's going to be a big one
i can already feel it
and if it breaks it will be
the beginning of the end
of you and me
all over again

stop i say
i will not have it
i will not let you ruin my sunny day
the days are so few
the storms are so many

no no i say
you will not rain on my parade
my arms to the sky
i will push you away
you want to blow me?
you are already blown away


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Comments:

I really like the positive defiance here.
A good write, worthy of my 'Like it'

Posted: Jan 15, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks for reading and responding ricky! Yeah the poem was definately written with a defiance in mind - almost wrote it from the perpective of a small child in that sense!
Take care!
SN



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