
Random First Lines: You enter me like a dreamI see your soft pale face come's out of the darkYour hands are as could as iceBut I... : Erotica » Read
This is a flashback to some of my favourite childhood memories. A wish to return to days when life was simple and worry free. View table of contents...
Submitted: Dec 2, 2007 Reads: 68 Comments: 4 Likes: 2
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beautifully awakened similar memories of my childhood in Gujrat.
Posted: Dec 2, 2007
Hi S Nayar
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Posted: Jan 13, 2008
Hi
Sorry the last comment transmitted while I was still typing. Probably because I was rushing to say what a
stunning piece of writing I think this is!
The descriptive words just flood the senses.
Definitely one I will repeat read. An easy 'like it'!
Posted: Jan 13, 2008
Wonderful poetry! Very descriptive and intriguing, I am definitely going to read more of your writing! =)
~Maple
Posted: Jul 9, 2008
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