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She Dances

Poem By: S Nayar
Poetry


On watching a friend as she danced in absolute abandon... View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Sep 2, 2007    Reads: 67    Comments: 3    Likes: 0   


She dances...
hands in the air streaming down
fingers running through her hair
down her sides tracing curves
hips swinging to the unseen harmony

body liquid, muscles fluid
eyes shut, mind detached
worries of the moment forgotten
in perfect abandon, absolute oblivion

round and round she flows
commanded by the music inside
haunting, beauty, joy, delight,
inhibition personified

it is pleasure to watch you dance


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Comments:

very nice :) wild and free.

Posted: Sep 2, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you for reading air! :)

My sister is a dancer and so I have seen her dance on numerous occasions. You have captured the essence of the dance quite well. Good job.

Posted: Sep 2, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you Spe. My friend did all the hard work, I simply wrote it down. It was like taking a photograph! :)

I love it :) On a cloudy Monday-blues day, it brought a smile to my face.
The best thing about dancing is when you can forget there's anyone else around :)

Posted: Sep 2, 2007

Author Comment:

Glad you enjoyed it Rauna. Yes that is the gift of dance - forgetting everyone and everything around! :)



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