Mare Tranquillitatis
Stand under an autumn shadow,
And you will know what loneliness is.
Awake.
Eyes in black dress.
And thoughts that do not know
Who their dreamers are.
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Mare Tranquillitatis
Poem By: S R Forbes
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This is a poem I wrote in high school, I believe it was not for a class. View table of contents...
Submitted: Dec 19, 2007 Reads: 40 Comments: 3 Likes: 2
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I loved the last two lines, they remind me of quite a few poems I've written in the past, only this is better, hence the comment. Bloody brilliant, my friend.
Posted: Dec 21, 2007
Your poetry has a way of bursting off the screen at me! It has so much emotion. Well written!
Posted: Dec 23, 2007
Really quite powerful stuff. Nice!
Glad I discovered this one.
The Rogue Hat Company
Posted: Feb 7, 2008
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