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Submitted: Oct 5, 2008 Reads: 39 Comments: 4 Likes: 4
Death sweet death the visitor,
dark color at my door.
Im hesitant to answer,
for what I fears in store.
With you I shall play hide and seek,
so knock forever more.
There are worse for you to take,
please leave me,
I implore.
I know what life has got to give,
I know of pain and sorrow.
I do not know what you shall bring,
to payments for my borrow.
You seem so dark,
to dark to read,
a shadow for the grave.
Death sweet death,
leave me to live.
What is lost for if I stay?
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hi! s. initially i thought u were dejected with life to call death 'sweet'. but after reading the poem, i'm sure it won't claim u. u r needed more here as a poet. i wish u many many years of long, happy, peaceful life. good work here. lol. ;-)
Posted: Oct 5, 2008
I agree fully with Bubbly's comment.You are needed as a poet here for you ARE a master of poetry. Another enjoyable read from you. :)
Posted: Oct 5, 2008
My opinions of you were true. See I told you. I hope you listen. But I am not totally sure you do. Great poem. I really loved it.
Posted: Oct 5, 2008
Master of Poetry they call you, and that may just be true. Another great poem.
Posted: Oct 14, 2008
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