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INVISIBlE TEARS

Poem By: sam316547
Poetry


HA! This is almost too easy. :) Alright this is a response to XBrokenHeartedX's challenge. My topic is Invisible tears that never stop....
Hehe. I kind of wanted a lamp post. oh well. I hope it came out ok....
:) ^^
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Submitted: Aug 9, 2008    Reads: 94    Comments: 6    Likes: 4   


Invisible tears

Here I sit numb from all the pain

Wondering if I’m going insane

No matter how hard I cry my cheeks stay dry

No one will listen so there are no tears to glisten

Upon my cheek

I’m just to weak lying here bare

Open with my emotions stitched in my sleeves wishing for the tears

That dare not show

I’m all alone among the dark my skin with out it’s glow

Oh how I wish you’d know

The pain that I whether

Through the hidden storm

If just a tear that never shows, if just for a drop of sorrow

that never flows

I’d give my tattered soul

Even if it’s not whole

I’d give my empty heart

Even if it’s hollow

I’d give my last breathe

Even is it’s shallow

It wouldn’t matter

I’m just glass, I’d just shatter

I can prey everyday but not a single tear

My dear will ever show

So instead I sit in fear waiting for it to end

As the blood drips, I feel no pain

Though I hear my name I drift

Almost like I’m slipping off a cliff

Just as the dark closes in

They began

The gentle wetness of my tears

They pour and pour

They’re everything I adore

Oh what I wouldn’t give

To see my invisible tears


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Comments:

Very moving, A very beautiful descriptive verse. now where's that like it button!!

Posted: Aug 9, 2008

Author Comment:

:) THNX.!!

Ha Ha I'm sorry! I would give you excuses at to why it wasn't so hard...but you just wouldn't believe me:) Ha Ha this was such a beautiful poem! You really did well with this challenge. I think my favorite lines would have to be: I’d give my tattered soul

Even if it’s not whole

I’d give my empty heart

Even if it’s hollow

I’d give my last breathe

Even is it’s shallow

It wouldn’t matter

I’m just glass, I’d just shatter

Really really beautiful. The emotion was very strong, and I could really connect with this. Fantabulous job! Now I must read more of your work... :)

Posted: Aug 9, 2008

Author Comment:

YAY thank you so much....Fair warning though most of my other stuff sucks.... I have to post some others..... :)

Wow, very powerful.

Love Always,
Erin

Posted: Aug 10, 2008

Author Comment:

:) THNX

beautiful....powerful....great job...please keep writing from your heart :) -zia

Posted: Aug 14, 2008

Author Comment:

:) Will do. The poems are usually written while going through great sorrow. :)
THNX so much for the comment. :)

That was really beautiful! Really touching! I can tell that you really put alot of feeling into it. Keep writing!

Posted: Aug 19, 2008

Author Comment:

THNX will do. Ya emotions kind of my thing....

This poem touches my heart somewhere deep. Intense, emotional.

Posted: Oct 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you! :)



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