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nightmares that act like dreams

Poem By: sam316547
Poetry


Just another one I tryed to get out it fought though so it's a little broken. Oh well. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 14, 2008    Reads: 48    Comments: 3    Likes: 2   


without looking back could you leave

If it meant that you could have your greatest dream

But never means never

Would you disapear into the sun

Would you run and run

Until your lungs gave way

Just to have that day

The day your dreams come true

The day your nightmares are born

I am torn I would not choose to loose

not my dream or my life

what about you what would you do

Go head disapear into the night

Dear friend you still have not won the fight

Your dreams will follow

and their shadows too

I guess i'm saying are dreams are nightmares with bright bows

temtations That are hard to resist

Needs that somehow tangle with selful greeds

Again my dear Our dreams do not begin and

They're always to bussy to end.


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Comments:

i like it

Posted: Jul 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Ummm. Cool...I'm not really sure about this one though...
Thnx for your comment. :)

This is the best poetry of yours I've read so far. ROCK ON !!!!!!!XD!!XP!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted: Aug 6, 2008

Author Comment:

It's not poetry butt head! It's creative fiction! Thank you though. :)

I liked this.It reminds me of my poem"What Are Dreams."It relates so much to this one.I think you'll agre if you read it.So talented and loved the rhyming.

Posted: Aug 7, 2008

Author Comment:

:) yep. I'm going to be visting your page very soon.



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