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Stand In My Shadow

Poem By: Samii
Poetry


This was written for someone who deserves a hell of a lot more than they recieve. You know who you are and you know i'm always there for you. Cheese cat x. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jan 24, 2007    Reads: 63    Comments: 3    Likes: 0   


 

 

So you think you're perfect

Well let me put you in your place

While you're bathing in your glory

Sickening smugness fills your face

 

So you got your poem published

From some seven years ago

But those all long years in between

And you've nothing new to show

 

So you can laugh at me and mock me

For not getting published yet

But I'll outshine you one day

And I won't let you forget

 

So I'll stand in your shadow

And watch you smile and shine

And when your sun has faded

It will be me who starts to shine

 

And when my sun starts shining

It won't ever, ever end

But I won't be smug about it

I'll still be your best friend

 

And when my books get published

I won't rub it in your face

I won't make you feel inferior

I'll take my fame with grace

 

So when you've long burned out

And you're feeling sad and low

Stand in my shadow

 

Stand in my shadow.

 

 

 

 

 


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Comments:

This is my new favorite!!! I can relate completely. I think we all have friends who over-ride one accomplishment.....sometimes out of insecurity, but mostly out of the arrogance that you relayed so well

Posted: Jan 24, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you!!!!! i'm always thrilled when i hear someone can realate to my work. Especially when its you.

I love you so much, Samii! (but not in a homoerotic way... don't read too much into it!) I'm so happy you put it up, its one of your best. May the Cheese Cat shower you with toasters! xxx

Posted: Jan 24, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks hun, love you too (what you said)xxx


Very nicely written, I love the rhyming (except where "shine" rhymed with "shine"). Good job on picking something almost all poets can relate to! In fact, it reminds me of an expierence I had a few months ago... :-) Long story, I won't burden you.

Nice work!

~Bitter Irony

Posted: Jan 24, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks for the comment, i'm glad people can relate to my work. As for the rhyming, i still have work to do on all my poems i think, everything i post are first attempts and basically are just the words that come to my head first, thanks for the advice tho i will work on it.



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