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Kritika's Chalange- Twists

Poem By: saratopia
Poetry


this is very funny.. sort of, not rele. idk! View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 8, 2008    Reads: 27    Comments: 2    Likes: 1   


TWISTS

I- Indescribably his words are full of LIES

T- To this day, I wonder why I believe him?

W- What am I suppost to do?

A- As soon as he is close I feel hate.

S- Soon, anger will over - take me

P- Participate

A- And the world is yours

C- Consetrait on the enimy

K- Know its weakness

E- Encourage what you could break down

D- Don't give up

W- What do you got to lose?

I- I'm with here.

T- To push you every step of the way.

H- Help me rise

W- What are you waiting for?

H- Hurry up!!

I- I'm waiting, come get me!
T- Tick, tock, tick tock
E- Eventually, this was bound to happen
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K- Know who you are dealing with.
U- Unspeakable words, will be thrown
C- Courage
K- Knee me, come on!
L- Lay my life down for you.
E- Entire heart.
D- doomed.


T- To this day
W- While lieing 6 feet under
I- I wish I could see your face.
S- So I can tell you everything
T- To ask you.
S- So, are you happy now?


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Comments:

Lol this is good. I think my poems are bad to so I know where your coming from. I'm still confused on these challenges.. ?_? Anyway.. this is good ^-^
Can't wait to read more ;)

Posted: Jul 8, 2008

Author Comment:

:D, i know u know. lol, thank you. I will help u with that today.. tomorrow... later! thxs.

Hiya sweetheart...this could have been better...

I know u r capable of writing much better than this...try this once again...

Posted: Jul 12, 2008

Author Comment:

=( i know... its hard though... i'm srry. I will re do it. i promise.



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