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Lost It

Poem By: saratopia
Poetry


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Submitted: Jun 13, 2008    Reads: 21    Comments: 2    Likes: 2   


Lost It

How come,

The one thing in life,

That is supost to make you whole,

Leave you torn,

And empty?

*****

Why,

Does the one thing,

People love,

Torment me.

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The one thing,

I thought,

Would make me happy,

Killed me.


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Comments:

Ah yes
It is irony once again.
We really can never judge something unless we have seen the other side of it.

Very good my precious lily! ^^

Posted: Jun 13, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you, Very; very angry when I wrote it.

yes...i agree with the theme...

Life is complicated for sure...

Posted: Jul 12, 2008

Author Comment:

:D thank you for reading... it is complicated but it get better.



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