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Lydia- Difference

Poem By: saratopia
Poetry


One of the poems I made for her... but this one I think fits her the best. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 29, 2008    Reads: 35    Comments: 7    Likes: 2   


Lydia- Difference

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Take a breath,

Find your courage,

And make the leap.

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Step out of the dark,

Into the glow.

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Dance,

Into a perfect desine.

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Your not alone.

The great you are,

Shows.

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Free,

To fly.

Free,

To sing.

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Close your eyes,

Fly millions of miles away.

Never stop believing.

Keep up thoughs skeems.

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Theres a difference,

That only you can make.



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Comments:

ooo *tears of joy* bebe sarah. awwww, i loveses you so much. i sorta want to hang out tonight.

L ♥

Posted: Jun 29, 2008

Author Comment:

YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! srry, i'm glad u liked it. of course we can, u at your house or your grandmas?

Sarah, you improved so well lately. These dedication poems are something so simple, and you turn it into something great. Still looking forward to reading more ;)

Posted: Jun 29, 2008

Author Comment:

Awwm lol. I hope to make them good enof for you and her to read. i'm glad you liked it.

But I love them anyway because they came from you =]

Posted: Jun 29, 2008

Author Comment:

=) hehe, u know i love u.

okay, ur comment box isn't working again. i'm at home.

L ♥

Posted: Jun 29, 2008

Author Comment:

k, thx for letting me know, i'll call right now!

Free,

To fly.

Free,

To sing.

were my favorite lines because it reminds me of one of my favorite songs from the newsboys, lol. this poem was really really great!
Steph(:

Posted: Jul 1, 2008

Author Comment:

lol, thx. Hey i love those guys, and that song to!

awww this is like releasing all worries and just making a difference. i love this poem. it really makes sense and its well put together :) keep writing.

Posted: Jul 4, 2008

Author Comment:

thx, i'm glad you liked it.

YEAH for sure...she sure is a darling and U have surely written this one with all honesty...

Posted: Jul 12, 2008

Author Comment:

she is my bestist friend. ^^ tank u very much,



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