Suffering Soals
The pain,
And suffering,
Of life,
Hurt more than anything.
****
A blank page,
With no name,
Is in need of care.
****
Light your candle,
Or be damned,
To live in the remains,
Of the lost soals.

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Submitted: Jun 17, 2008 Reads: 18 Comments: 3 Likes: 1
Suffering Soals
The pain,
And suffering,
Of life,
Hurt more than anything.
****
A blank page,
With no name,
Is in need of care.
****
Light your candle,
Or be damned,
To live in the remains,
Of the lost soals.
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oooooooooohhhhhhhhh, baby sarah. *tears of joy* you did wonderful, but your mispelling did take away from it.
Lydia_xxxx
Posted: Jun 17, 2008
Regardless of th spelling, my precious lily, this is really wonderful! ^^
Posted: Jun 18, 2008
Yes...is the word "SOUL"???
very soulful poem indeed...
Posted: Jul 12, 2008
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