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Suffering Soals

Poem By: saratopia
Poetry


For Lydia_xxxx challenge. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 17, 2008    Reads: 18    Comments: 3    Likes: 1   


Suffering Soals

The pain,

And suffering,

Of life,

Hurt more than anything.

****

A blank page,

With no name,

Is in need of care.

****

Light your candle,

Or be damned,

To live in the remains,

Of the lost soals.


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Comments:

oooooooooohhhhhhhhh, baby sarah. *tears of joy* you did wonderful, but your mispelling did take away from it.

Lydia_xxxx

Posted: Jun 17, 2008

Author Comment:

AW, i'm trying to wrok on that i rele am. but thx.

Regardless of th spelling, my precious lily, this is really wonderful! ^^

Posted: Jun 18, 2008

Author Comment:

y thank u.

Yes...is the word "SOUL"???

very soulful poem indeed...

Posted: Jul 12, 2008

Author Comment:

i know!!!!!!! and thank you.



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