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1. Wind
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3. Honor
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Submitted: Jun 22, 2008 Reads: 27 Comments: 3 Likes: 2
When the Clouds Go
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by: Saratopia
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It rains hard.
Wind clears the sky.
Raindbows show there faces.
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Should have felt a little deaper.
Then maybe,
Just maybe,
You would be here with me.
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Pointless letters on special paper,
Are found.
Laying in puddles,
on the streets.
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When the clouds clear,
Honor,
Will be reconised.
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Sarah I really love this.
I should tell you that you really have improved sooo well. :)
Keep it up my precious lily!
Posted: Jun 22, 2008
Wow, you did a fantastic job. Somewhat short, but still help a lot of power and meaning. Very nice poem. ^^
Posted: Jun 23, 2008
gripping and intense...
Posted: Jul 12, 2008
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