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Submitted: Jun 30, 2008 Reads: 49 Comments: 4 Likes: 2
What obstacle is this distance
What concern is this perverted logic
What matter is there but your love
Pure as the lumninescent moonlight
What obstacle is this time
What concern is this unknowingness
What matter is there but your hearts
Pure as sylphic moths to flame
What matter is there but this purity?
What matter is there but your lovers heart?
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Aww, thanks Sasha... I think it's beautiful. Even if you don't like it, I do. The message behind it is a good one. ^-^
Posted: Jul 1, 2008
Hmmm, now I wonder who this is about. ^
Posted: Jul 1, 2008
Thats very wonderful, sorry if I'm out of fantastic vocabulary, but it was rele great. Gosh, I need to go back to bed!
L ♥
Posted: Jul 27, 2008
Wow sasha! This is really really good! I like how you wrap such eloquent words into eloquent thoughts. That truly takes talent. This is an amazing poem and you are an amazing poet! Take care, Regan
Posted: Jul 28, 2008
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